I Lived a Dream
Even a fantasy can come true.6 total reviews
Comment from karenina
What a tenderly passionate wish fulfilment dream! Tastefully expressed, yet with no doubt the sizzle and heat of two in love!
Sometimes couples get on a different wavelength...it happens!
Ah, but true love finds a way to blossom from dream to reality!
Karenina
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
  |
What a tenderly passionate wish fulfilment dream! Tastefully expressed, yet with no doubt the sizzle and heat of two in love!
Sometimes couples get on a different wavelength...it happens!
Ah, but true love finds a way to blossom from dream to reality!
Karenina
Comment Written 13-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
-
Glad you enjoyed this. My wife asked who the woman was. I feigned innocence.
-
Good ploy!
Comment from Susan Newell
I rarely review erotic works, but the humor in this one was irresistible. The reference to "Outer Limit" taking control was really funny. One can assume your fantasy also resided there.
One tweak: second line ==> lies a latent power
Sue
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
|
I rarely review erotic works, but the humor in this one was irresistible. The reference to "Outer Limit" taking control was really funny. One can assume your fantasy also resided there.
One tweak: second line ==> lies a latent power
Sue
Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
-
I was not corrected with Grammarly but I searched Miriam-W and found Lay means "to place something down flat," while lie means "to be in a flat position on a surface." I stand corrected, as does the piece.
-
I have found many Grammarly errors in people's posts. Lie and lay are perhaps the most two confused words in English. It doesn't help that they have difficult conjugations. Lay requires an object. One way to remember is the child's prayer: Now I lay ME down to sleep. vs Now, I lie down to sleep.
Comment from harmony13
I liked the poem - I do believe a fantasy can come true! The author's
words are engaging, interesting, suspenseful, descriptive and creative.
The author's words kept me interested right to the end of the poem. The
poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
|
I liked the poem - I do believe a fantasy can come true! The author's
words are engaging, interesting, suspenseful, descriptive and creative.
The author's words kept me interested right to the end of the poem. The
poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
-
Very nice review. Thank you.
Comment from bob cullen
You've passed the two C test, you're both CREATIVE and CLEVER. Tom, your writing never disappoints. I sometimes fear we may well share common thoughts.
Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
 |
You've passed the two C test, you're both CREATIVE and CLEVER. Tom, your writing never disappoints. I sometimes fear we may well share common thoughts.
Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
-
Thank you. I need to review your portfolio to see if we are twins by word or blood.
Comment from Dr. Von
This piece is a passionate tale of possibility and disconnection. Your phrasing wove the tale to a tight end with good pacing. The poem is a well-written story with good art support. Thank you for your creativity. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
|
This piece is a passionate tale of possibility and disconnection. Your phrasing wove the tale to a tight end with good pacing. The poem is a well-written story with good art support. Thank you for your creativity. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
-
and I enjoyed your review. Thank you.
-
Thank you. You are very welcome.
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written post. The reader can be absorbed into these sort of romantic fantasies, but when do they cease to be a fantasy, and become the reality of what we imagine. This is beautifully written, with great style and draws the reader in, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
|
A beautifully written post. The reader can be absorbed into these sort of romantic fantasies, but when do they cease to be a fantasy, and become the reality of what we imagine. This is beautifully written, with great style and draws the reader in, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
-
Much appreciated for the comments and review.
-
Most welcome
-
Most welcome