One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and it's heading into my most hated time of the year, at least for me, the holidays and cold weather. The older I get, the less I can tolerate both!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and it's heading into my most hated time of the year, at least for me, the holidays and cold weather. The older I get, the less I can tolerate both!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Mike, thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
"The real secret to a fabulous life is to live imperfectly with great delight"
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Wild animals also like to eat pumpkins, especially deer. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and of course, autumn is my favorite time of year. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Wild animals also like to eat pumpkins, especially deer. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and of course, autumn is my favorite time of year. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
Gypsy
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
"pre-creepy pumpkins', great! What a way to describe a pumpkin about to become a Jack-O-lantern. Then the putrid pumpkins. Very nicely worded Gypsy. Very descriptive and imaginative.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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"pre-creepy pumpkins', great! What a way to describe a pumpkin about to become a Jack-O-lantern. Then the putrid pumpkins. Very nicely worded Gypsy. Very descriptive and imaginative.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, Gary. I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.
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Gypsy
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Just in time Ms. Gypsy, to get you a fresh baked new six out of the oven. The text is beautifully stated. The visuals are beautifully presented. The white swirled designs add a classy touch. Love the top photo as a header. The different colored font adds to the autumnal mood. Well-done, Miss Lady!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Just in time Ms. Gypsy, to get you a fresh baked new six out of the oven. The text is beautifully stated. The visuals are beautifully presented. The white swirled designs add a classy touch. Love the top photo as a header. The different colored font adds to the autumnal mood. Well-done, Miss Lady!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, Ms Sandy. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome. Hope you day is going well too.
Comment from lyenochka
I'm so glad you entered this contest, Gypsy! You created the before-Halloween and after-Halloween view of the pumpkins. I especially liked the "pre-creepy" pumpkins. Best wishes in the contest!!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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I'm so glad you entered this contest, Gypsy! You created the before-Halloween and after-Halloween view of the pumpkins. I especially liked the "pre-creepy" pumpkins. Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, Helen I appreciate your kind review. Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like the images you have painted in the poem. I remember the putrid pumpkins afterwards. Then I have to clean up the mess.
I found a typo. Putred -> Putrid
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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I like the images you have painted in the poem. I remember the putrid pumpkins afterwards. Then I have to clean up the mess.
I found a typo. Putred -> Putrid
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, Lisa. I appreciate your kind review and helpfullfeedback. I corrected that. Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from prettybluebirds
I don't know how you track all these different poetry styles. This one is unlike your usual poems, but it is beautiful and well-written. The artwork is perfect too. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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I don't know how you track all these different poetry styles. This one is unlike your usual poems, but it is beautiful and well-written. The artwork is perfect too. I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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The 3/6/9 poem is a fanstory contest, I didn't come up with the form but I'm used to writing short forms.. this type is very easy.. you just count syllables. . Give it a trytry... it's free to enter the contest and you can winn 100 dollars. I already won a couple. It's fun (*<>*)
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy