The Memorial Golf Tournament
Family tournament tributes14 total reviews
Comment from dellsworthpoet
A nice memory shared with warmth and humor. The narrative stays on point. The images are clear. The closing is well presented.
Thanks for a good read. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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A nice memory shared with warmth and humor. The narrative stays on point. The images are clear. The closing is well presented.
Thanks for a good read. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. I do appreciate being in a group with wonderful help and support.
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You are welcome.
Comment from prettybluebirds
This is a lovely family story. It is nicely written and easy to follow and understand. It sounds like you all have a great and memorable time every year. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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This is a lovely family story. It is nicely written and easy to follow and understand. It sounds like you all have a great and memorable time every year. I wish you worlds of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. I am enjoying being in a group with your help and support.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a great memory you shared in your contest entry,
Sarah. I enjoyed reading it. I liked the way you started
and ended it with a nod to family. Your words were
descriptive and well thought out. I could see everything
as I read. I liked the way all the participants, young and
old, were rewarded. The dinner afterward sounded delicious.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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What a great memory you shared in your contest entry,
Sarah. I enjoyed reading it. I liked the way you started
and ended it with a nod to family. Your words were
descriptive and well thought out. I could see everything
as I read. I liked the way all the participants, young and
old, were rewarded. The dinner afterward sounded delicious.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. I am enjoying being part of a writing group with great help and support. Again, thanks.
Comment from Michaela Moore
I adore the way you have begun and ended your story with the announcement. A lovely way to enfold this precious story of what reads to be a precious family! I love this so much!
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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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I adore the way you have begun and ended your story with the announcement. A lovely way to enfold this precious story of what reads to be a precious family! I love this so much!
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Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate your help and support. I am enjoying being part of this group and reading your work also.
