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The Memorial Golf Tournament

Family tournament tributes

14 total reviews 
Comment from karenina
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It's fun to hear how different families establish holiday traditions. As for me, I was once asked to leave a par three course because I hit three other players over the "course" (see what I did there?) of five holes.

The important thing is all the great memories and the fact that the younger generation will continue this tradition. Until then you're there to beat the drum and award those gold balls and Easter eggs!


Karenina


 Comment Written 25-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2023
    Thanks for letting me share my memories. As people moved away, the tournament ended. But we have kept a gathering of family for early December. This year we have rented a house in St. Augustine,Fl.for 4 days. We are excited to see each other. This years hosts sent our itinerary last week. There was no time to sleep! I am sure I will write about it when I get back. Happy holidays! Sarah
reply by karenina on 26-Nov-2023
    Happy Holidays to you, Sarah! Enjoy and come back to tell us all about it!
Comment from Thomas Blanks
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Hello,
I see you joined FanStory in August of 2022. Has anyone told you about font size? If you paste a story into the Fan Story tool, it will default to a tiny font size. Many people have a hard time reading it and will pass up your story because of that, no matter how good it is.

The first thing you must do before anything else is change the setting under the "BODY" box from Basic Editor to Advanced Editor. Then, when you paste your story, you can edit the font size and the font type. I use 18 size.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
    Thank you for reviewing my story. And, thanks for the posting tips. I did not know that. Sarah
Comment from Sally Law
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Welcome to FanStory, Sarah! It is so nice to read you today. I enjoyed your story as my husband and I have had many wonderful golfing memories.

Your writing talent is obvious in this offering. I hope you stay awhile....

Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the Share Your Story contest.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2022
    Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate your support and I look forward to reading some of your work. Sarah
Comment from Ric Myworld
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The lines of succession are continuously moving on, and thank goodness, there are still a few who take the helm and keep family traditions in place. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 16-Sep-2022
    Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate your time for reading and reviewing my post.
Comment from BermyBye50
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Sarah Robin,

This is a beautiful entry in the Share Your Story contest. As an avid golfer myself, I've had the opportunity to play in a few family memorial and other competitive golf tournaments. The value of family and maintaining those close relationships are a true blessing for your family. As the matriarch you must be very proud that the younger members of the family are involved in keeping this vital family tradition alive going forward into the future.

All the best in the contest.

Eugene

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
    Thank you, Eugene for your kind words. I am truly blessed to have a wonderful family. Thanks for your support.
Comment from LJbutterfly
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This is a beautiful family story of sharing, family reunion, joy, and love. The writing is excellent, with great detail and imagery. Thanks for sharing your story on this site.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
    Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate having you take a look at work.
Comment from royowen
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This sounds like a marvellous tradition, and would probably engender and provoke not only present day family ventures but likewise all the futures, they would be incredibly worthwhile memories to create a legend. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2022
    Thank you Roy for your kind words. I appreciate your help and support.
reply by royowen on 13-Sep-2022
    Most welcome
reply by royowen on 13-Sep-2022
    Most welcome
Comment from Wayne Fowler
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Nice story. Nicely written. Good work.
It's always good when family can stay together, at least in spirit. All too often, for a variety of reasons, that just isn't the case.
Good luck in the contest. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
    Thank you, Wayne for your encouraging words. I appreciate your review. Sarah
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
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What an endearing story.

My husband and I play golf, we live in California, so there is no shortage of courses to play:)

I love the essence of this story.
It is full of tradition, love, emotion, and a sense of honor.

Your writing is honest, and perfectly descriptive. You paint a vivid picture for the reader to see through, feel, taste and touch the story.
You have essentially allowed them to step
"into," your writing.

Well done!


 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
    Thank you ever so much for your kind words. I appreciate your comments and support. I look forward to reading some of your work. Sarah
Comment from Terry Broxson
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Sarah, this is a wonderful story of a great family tradition. I was not a golfer, although I do enjoy following it on a professional level. But the important thing in the story is the family tradition, it would not have to be golf.

One suggestion, you use the term "a bite to eat." That is a good southern phrase, but your description of all the food and the anticipation of eating makes me feel you need a more bombastic phrase for the feast that awaits. Good job. Terry.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2022
    Thanks Terry, I thought I had answered this. I am so excited about the six as well as being so well received. Any ideas for substitution for "bite to eat"? You know that I am just an old Southern girl!