Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your contest entry, Mystery Author.
Great job with the rhymes and the smooth flow. Your
poem tells a great love story with a perfect picture to
illustrate it.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan

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 Comment Written 10-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022

Thank you!