Comment from LovnPeace

Excellent

I very much relate to this writing. There have been many times in my life where hope was gone. I too have screamed the primal scream of pain. Blessings, Barbara. Xo

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022

Well I do hope that this helps heal you and not disturb you by bringing back unpleasant memories?
Doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Dang you are good with the whole picture selection endeavor. Your poem rocks. I really enjoyed the flow and trajectory. I am starting to smile when I see your name coming up on a read, Keep up the great work!

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022

Well dang Douglas!
Yes, you caught this before I could complete it and there's a second part to this Hell!
"Hell or No Hell?" (B)
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While my favorite hellishness would be way back in 2005.
Yes, when I competed in DC through the International Society of Poetry.
When I presented a piece I entitled,
"Hell on Earth Damn it to Shame!"
(Is this Satan's Grim Game?)
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Note: Since we were supposed to supply the White House with peace poems.
Yes, and I forgot mine.
I went in the middle of the parchment paper that was stretched out across the many tables.
And, with artwork, I wrote that poem using three colored markers.
And in the section that was about 2 ft by 3 ft.
Showing the Twin Towers in the beginning and talking about all the past Wars up to the current problems we were having at the time with Iran, I believe.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky