One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from aryr
What a beautiful picture of the tiny couple in the distance, Gypsy. Your words definitely showed sincerity and love. They were indeed from the heart. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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What a beautiful picture of the tiny couple in the distance, Gypsy. Your words definitely showed sincerity and love. They were indeed from the heart. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Blessed be and hugs
Gypsy
"The real secret to a fabulous life is to live imperfectly with great delight"
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n Hugs!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have never seen this poetic form before but liked it, a lot. I am a huge fan of unconditional love and I see it flowing all over this beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. I was blessed by reading.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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I have never seen this poetic form before but liked it, a lot. I am a huge fan of unconditional love and I see it flowing all over this beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing it with us. I was blessed by reading.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"The real secret to a fabulous life is to live imperfectly with great delight"
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your new type of kanchi poem - good picture presentation- appears to be a love poem- about love above material things- good use of descriptive metaphors -
Good job
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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I like your new type of kanchi poem - good picture presentation- appears to be a love poem- about love above material things- good use of descriptive metaphors -
Good job
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"The real secret to a fabulous life is to live imperfectly with great delight"
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is a beautifully written and presented poem about longing for romance and love, especially the color of the wine glass in the end.
I guess this will be next week's Japanese Club topic.
Well done.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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This is a beautifully written and presented poem about longing for romance and love, especially the color of the wine glass in the end.
I guess this will be next week's Japanese Club topic.
Well done.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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It could be (*÷*)
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"The real secret to a fabulous life is to live imperfectly with great delight" - unknown
Comment from lyenochka
That really shows the heart of the narrator as fully dedicated to the beloved. In the stark extreme of the end of the world, all priorities are put in perspective and the loved is prized over everything.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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That really shows the heart of the narrator as fully dedicated to the beloved. In the stark extreme of the end of the world, all priorities are put in perspective and the loved is prized over everything.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Hehe... it's fictional and somewhat silly. In real life, i would want to be with my children.
Helen, thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
MariVal
"The real secret to a fabulous life is to live imperfectly with great delight" - unknown
Comment from Jumbo J
Hola Reina Gitana,
mi mente se asienta en el amor incontrolable con besos duraderos
mas
mas
mas.
A truly beautiful composition with flavours, tastes and colours to set a heart on fire. Magic presentation in form and art. Anything that has double the love... I would also go to the end of the world.
With our thoughts we create...
the song in our heart.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Hola Reina Gitana,
mi mente se asienta en el amor incontrolable con besos duraderos
mas
mas
mas.
A truly beautiful composition with flavours, tastes and colours to set a heart on fire. Magic presentation in form and art. Anything that has double the love... I would also go to the end of the world.
With our thoughts we create...
the song in our heart.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Jaime, thank you very much for your delightful review and kind words, amigo mio, mi amor.
Reina Gitana
"The real secret to a fabulous life is to live imperfectly with great delight"
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Whew! Ms. Gypsy,
Someone sounds hot to trot. This is such a colorful and vibrant poem. I love the three words repeated in each section of the poem. The use of a clearly readable cursive font makes the piece seem even more personal, like a love letter. The double visuals fit perfectly. You have a lot of space at the bottom, so I would drop the first line of the poem down one space for better balance. I have no sixes left, but if I did, you would get it. This is a great poem. I am liking these longer selections from you.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Whew! Ms. Gypsy,
Someone sounds hot to trot. This is such a colorful and vibrant poem. I love the three words repeated in each section of the poem. The use of a clearly readable cursive font makes the piece seem even more personal, like a love letter. The double visuals fit perfectly. You have a lot of space at the bottom, so I would drop the first line of the poem down one space for better balance. I have no sixes left, but if I did, you would get it. This is a great poem. I am liking these longer selections from you.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Ms Sandy
I tried bringing the text down a line, I agree with you, but the format won't let me. It has happened since fanstory added new fonts. Also, I can't delete the space between lines.
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Blessed be and hugs
Gypsy
"The real secret to a fabulous life is to live imperfectly with great delight"
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Ms. Gypsy, I have heard your complaint from several others, and I too have struggled with spacing since the addition of the new fonts. No problem because it doesn't change the poetic quality. You are always welcome.
Comment from jessizero
I loved this poem. I have never seen this format of poem before, but it was very effective. I love that you would only want this person at the end of the world. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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I loved this poem. I have never seen this format of poem before, but it was very effective. I love that you would only want this person at the end of the world. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs