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Comment from aryr
What a great picture of the sunset and I really appreciated Stephen King's quote, Gypsy. The words of your tanka confirmed the delights of the sunset. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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What a great picture of the sunset and I really appreciated Stephen King's quote, Gypsy. The words of your tanka confirmed the delights of the sunset. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Blessed be and hugs
Gypsy
"The real secret to a fabulous life is to live imperfectly with great delight"
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n Hugs!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem is sad, but I guess it's true because as I fall asleep at night I don't laugh, and passion does slip away. I know this poem is filled with metaphors. It's an excellent poem. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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This poem is sad, but I guess it's true because as I fall asleep at night I don't laugh, and passion does slip away. I know this poem is filled with metaphors. It's an excellent poem. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"The real secret to a fabulous life is to live imperfectly with great delight"
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----this is the way I think of fall, as reflecting the emptiness and darker days of my marriage ending, both are depressing, plus the on rushing Holidays, of which I'm not a fan
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----this is the way I think of fall, as reflecting the emptiness and darker days of my marriage ending, both are depressing, plus the on rushing Holidays, of which I'm not a fan
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, Mike. I appreciate your review. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, a sad end-of-day poem. Why is it that the night triggers so many different memories and emotions? Beautiful presentation. Gorgeous photo. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Hi Gypsy, a sad end-of-day poem. Why is it that the night triggers so many different memories and emotions? Beautiful presentation. Gorgeous photo. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, Margaret. I appreciate your review. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed reading your tanka.
Constant effort and input is required from both parties to make a relationship last - it's so easy to allow the darkness to creep in and steal the laughter and passion.
I love your presentation - the text colours mirror the artwork perfectly.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Hello Gypsy :)
I enjoyed reading your tanka.
Constant effort and input is required from both parties to make a relationship last - it's so easy to allow the darkness to creep in and steal the laughter and passion.
I love your presentation - the text colours mirror the artwork perfectly.
Best wishes as always, Debra :)
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, It's good to hear from you. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
You are the master of metaphor and ambiguity, (or is that mistress?) yes indeed, there are so many forms of climactic metaphors out there, but they create imagery like nothing else, well done Gypsy,, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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You are the master of metaphor and ambiguity, (or is that mistress?) yes indeed, there are so many forms of climactic metaphors out there, but they create imagery like nothing else, well done Gypsy,, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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I just read your poetic dedication to me... I'm so honored by your kindness. Thank you for your review, I always look forward to them because they are so helpful and kind. May you have a wonderful weekend. God bless you.
Gypsy
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You deserve it, I know the sacrifices you made, and so does God, be blessed Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
Another sad end of the day poem. I think that's why many people become anxious at sunset. This poem shows us that even the memories of a once passionate love dissipates and darkens with the night. Another beautiful presentation! Hope you saw Roy's poem for you!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Another sad end of the day poem. I think that's why many people become anxious at sunset. This poem shows us that even the memories of a once passionate love dissipates and darkens with the night. Another beautiful presentation! Hope you saw Roy's poem for you!
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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What? I didn't see Roy's poem. I was so behind on my inbox reviews I haven't had time for anything else. I'll have to look for it. (*<>*)
Thank you very much for the lovely review and feedback. May you have a restful and fun weekend.
MariVal oxoxo