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Her eyes tell of desire.
2 total reviews
Comment from
Douglas Goff
Vivid to the point. Hard to review these short poems, but I could review the woman in the picture. (six stars for her). You met all of the requirements of the contest. Nice work, keep it up!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
Oh, yeah, we agree that's why I picked her. Thanks for the read and the feedback.
Comment from
jessizero
You did a great job with the syllable count. "My heart drums" was a great phrase, too. Thank you for sharing this short poem here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
Thanks for the read and feedback.
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