A Little Boy's Heart
An Acrostic Poem for the challenge club12 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for sharing the artwork, notes, and poem, kahpot.
-I'm sure the family appreciates you telling the story, and that it had a positive outcome had to be inspiring.
-You wrote a good poem with effective imagery and rhyme as you describe this baby's journey. Resilience in such a tiny person is an amazing thing.
Sometimes I think it is a gift that is given for reasons we can't explain.
-A very nice conclusion to the agony they must have felt before that.
-I am sorry about you having to have bypass surgery and hope each day you are better. Take care of yourself and be well!!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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-Thanks for sharing the artwork, notes, and poem, kahpot.
-I'm sure the family appreciates you telling the story, and that it had a positive outcome had to be inspiring.
-You wrote a good poem with effective imagery and rhyme as you describe this baby's journey. Resilience in such a tiny person is an amazing thing.
Sometimes I think it is a gift that is given for reasons we can't explain.
-A very nice conclusion to the agony they must have felt before that.
-I am sorry about you having to have bypass surgery and hope each day you are better. Take care of yourself and be well!!
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments and wishes, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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You are very welcome, kahpot.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is very humbling to see others, especially one so young, fight for life when we have it easy and I am sorry you have had to have surgery and hope you give up the smoking soon, a fine acrostic for the club, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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It is very humbling to see others, especially one so young, fight for life when we have it easy and I am sorry you have had to have surgery and hope you give up the smoking soon, a fine acrostic for the club, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you Dolly, I am back home now and looking forward to reading and writing some more, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
What a sweet story to share of this family and their precious son.
I love acrostic poems and you have done a splendid job with this one.
Best of health to you.
Pam
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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What a sweet story to share of this family and their precious son.
I love acrostic poems and you have done a splendid job with this one.
Best of health to you.
Pam
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from country ranch writer
Ouch! If that isn't a wake up all I don't know what us my friend and take stick if yiurkufe.my husband learned to late in life don't be. Like him. Lung cancer took him from me.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Ouch! If that isn't a wake up all I don't know what us my friend and take stick if yiurkufe.my husband learned to late in life don't be. Like him. Lung cancer took him from me.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you, and yes, it is a wake up call, back home now and looking forward to reading and writing more, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Hugs
Comment from John Ciarmello
How beautiful this piece is Kahpot, and written for Tyson with a full heart. You have gone through so much yourself, and your selflessness has prompted you to write about another. I have a new respect for you, my friend not only as a writer but as a person. I'm wishing you all the best for a speedy recovery. Both of you! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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How beautiful this piece is Kahpot, and written for Tyson with a full heart. You have gone through so much yourself, and your selflessness has prompted you to write about another. I have a new respect for you, my friend not only as a writer but as a person. I'm wishing you all the best for a speedy recovery. Both of you! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you JohnC, my problem was caused by me, Tyson looked so frail and had not yet started life, I am back home and looking for to reading and writing some more, your six stars and wonderful comments are a pleasure to see and read, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your club response read well, kahpot. The color scheme and
artwork paired perfectly. You told a gripping story of life and
death. I liked the rhyme scheme and smooth flow. Your well-
thought out words created great imagery. What a miracle at the
end--the little boy lived. I pray you are doing well after your
surgery.
Thanks for participating, Jan
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Your club response read well, kahpot. The color scheme and
artwork paired perfectly. You told a gripping story of life and
death. I liked the rhyme scheme and smooth flow. Your well-
thought out words created great imagery. What a miracle at the
end--the little boy lived. I pray you are doing well after your
surgery.
Thanks for participating, Jan
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, I am back home now and looking forward to reading and writing more, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Kym
Your beatiful Acrostic poem is very sad. It's always hard when people are sick but it's even more when it's a child. Well done.
Gypsy hugs
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Hello, Kym
Your beatiful Acrostic poem is very sad. It's always hard when people are sick but it's even more when it's a child. Well done.
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Kahpot,
I hope you have a speedy recovery!
Your poem has the sadness of pain and loss, but you write of the happiness of a boy who is finally free of the pain of this earth. His life and death are symbolic of each of our lives. Relief will come for all of us someday, and we won't feel pain or sorrow any more.
A great poem and dedication to this boy's life.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Kahpot,
I hope you have a speedy recovery!
Your poem has the sadness of pain and loss, but you write of the happiness of a boy who is finally free of the pain of this earth. His life and death are symbolic of each of our lives. Relief will come for all of us someday, and we won't feel pain or sorrow any more.
A great poem and dedication to this boy's life.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, I am back home now and looking forward to reading and writing more, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from June Sargent
This was a very poignant and touching piece. I'm happy to hear that Tyson was able to go home. My best wishes for your quick recovery as well! Take care.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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This was a very poignant and touching piece. I'm happy to hear that Tyson was able to go home. My best wishes for your quick recovery as well! Take care.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, I am back home now and looking forward to reading and writing more, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy G
Glad to hear you are okay, but what a difficult journey is beginning for this family. I pray that Tyson will recover quickly and be able to have a full and happy life. Your poem is very moving, and is very well written.
Wendy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Glad to hear you are okay, but what a difficult journey is beginning for this family. I pray that Tyson will recover quickly and be able to have a full and happy life. Your poem is very moving, and is very well written.
Wendy
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much, I am back home and looking forward to reading and writing, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
