Tanka Collection
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Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Very nice. I like how you varied the color of your type to resemble the sunset. I can almost see the setting sun just in viewing the letters without even reading them.
Nicely worded.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Very nice. I like how you varied the color of your type to resemble the sunset. I can almost see the setting sun just in viewing the letters without even reading them.
Nicely worded.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
"The real secret to a fabulous life is to live imperfectly with great delight"
Comment from Jumbo J
Hola Reina Gitana,
en el horizonte mi mirada se convierte en anticipación del fuego que quema mi deseo como la salida de la luna que ilumina las posibilidades de otro dÃa.
Composición verdaderamente mente hermosa que tocó mi corazón. Amor, respeto, besitos y abrazos Reina Gitana.
With our thoughts we create...
illumination through love.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Hola Reina Gitana,
en el horizonte mi mirada se convierte en anticipación del fuego que quema mi deseo como la salida de la luna que ilumina las posibilidades de otro dÃa.
Composición verdaderamente mente hermosa que tocó mi corazón. Amor, respeto, besitos y abrazos Reina Gitana.
With our thoughts we create...
illumination through love.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Jaime, me encanta leer tu Español. A mi tambien me gustaria ver la Luna reflejada en tus preciosos ojos. Gracias, guapo.
Muchisimas gracias por Las seis Estrella.
Besitos y abrazos, MI corazon.
Reina Gitana
"The real secret to a fabulous life is to live imperfectly with great delight"
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Why, thank you. I'm not so sure as to how my Spanish translates, but I'm enjoying the lessons and most of all, the connection.
My reflection is floating on trade winds to capture the bounty of its quest.
And you know I am an emotional reviewer... how can this not receive an exceptional!
My delight is in the knowing that perfection is an illusion to how one perceives themselves.
Wasted emotions clutter space for real life to enter~~ Jumbo.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The artwork you chose fits this poem perfectly. I enjoyed the vivid descriptions you gave. This poem is very romantic. Once the sun sets and the sky is dark, the sun rises, and the sky is light. Thank you for sharing and I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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The artwork you chose fits this poem perfectly. I enjoyed the vivid descriptions you gave. This poem is very romantic. Once the sun sets and the sky is dark, the sun rises, and the sky is light. Thank you for sharing and I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for the lovely review and kind feedback. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
The passions like the sunset is beautiful but sad. When it means it ends and "that darkly dies every night." But I like the quote about the sun's "fiery kiss to night." So maybe it's not so sad since it happens everyday.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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The passions like the sunset is beautiful but sad. When it means it ends and "that darkly dies every night." But I like the quote about the sun's "fiery kiss to night." So maybe it's not so sad since it happens everyday.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Yes, you are right, there's always hope for a new sunrise.
Thank you (*÷*) Helen
It's always good to hear from you.
MariVal xoxox ❤️
MariVal xoxoxo
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- good picture presentation- nice sunset- poem flows well- has a clear theme- and a rhyme quality that I enjoyed- good use of metaphors paints your picture- good job
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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I like your poem- good picture presentation- nice sunset- poem flows well- has a clear theme- and a rhyme quality that I enjoyed- good use of metaphors paints your picture- good job
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Thank you, AP. I am grateful for your time and helpful review. Hugs!
Gypsy
"I have lived, I have lost... but I have never forgotten the joy of belonging."
Comment from aryr
This was a great picture of a sunset, Gypsy. And your words were a blessing, they were so brilliant because they showed that true love does exist. Blessed be n Hugs!
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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This was a great picture of a sunset, Gypsy. And your words were a blessing, they were so brilliant because they showed that true love does exist. Blessed be n Hugs!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Aryr. I am grateful for your time and helpful review. Blessed be and Hugs!
Gypsy
"I have lived, I have lost... but I have never forgotten the joy of belonging."
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n Hugs!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
Beautifully stated and presented Tanka. I am starting to sound like a broken record. Lol The text is pleasing to read and the large visual and the small purple Iris is lovely. Thank you for sharing again a poem that was a pleasure to read and see.
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Beautifully stated and presented Tanka. I am starting to sound like a broken record. Lol The text is pleasing to read and the large visual and the small purple Iris is lovely. Thank you for sharing again a poem that was a pleasure to read and see.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Ms. Sandra. I am grateful for your time and helpful review. Hugs!
Gypsy
"I have lived, I have lost... but I have never forgotten the joy of belonging."
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love 'darkly dies' for the simple beauty in the tragedy, and your use of the horizon as a destination and meeting of the current and passed is inspired. Beautifully written.
Mike
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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I love 'darkly dies' for the simple beauty in the tragedy, and your use of the horizon as a destination and meeting of the current and passed is inspired. Beautifully written.
Mike
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Mike. I am grateful for your time and helpful review. Hugs!
Gypsy
"I have lived, I have lost... but I have never forgotten the joy of belonging."
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written post, and a classic love poem to the glory of love and the dying monarch of the day, this is another beautifully written piece, that deserves the light of day, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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A beautifully written post, and a classic love poem to the glory of love and the dying monarch of the day, this is another beautifully written piece, that deserves the light of day, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Roy. I am grateful for your time and helpful review. Hugs!
Gypsy
"I have lived, I have lost... but I have never forgotten the joy of belonging."
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Most welcome