Let Hope Survive
A poem about how life will be24 total reviews
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem- excellent picture presentation- message of your poem is clear and motivational- never give up - don't loose hope- last thing in Pandora's box- hope- good syllable count for contest- good job - good luck!!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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I like your poem- excellent picture presentation- message of your poem is clear and motivational- never give up - don't loose hope- last thing in Pandora's box- hope- good syllable count for contest- good job - good luck!!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for reading and rating my poem.
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
You have selected the perfect 20 syllable to leave a message of hope.
This is a reminder to never let life's pressures, disappointments, or experiences dictate how you live your life.
This verse is one of determination and perseverance. A message that I hope the readers who need it will receive it.
I love the 3-D visual!!
Very effective!!
Well done!
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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You have selected the perfect 20 syllable to leave a message of hope.
This is a reminder to never let life's pressures, disappointments, or experiences dictate how you live your life.
This verse is one of determination and perseverance. A message that I hope the readers who need it will receive it.
I love the 3-D visual!!
Very effective!!
Well done!
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Thanks, so much for your supportive comments and rating.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Very true. Whatever may happen, keep on keeping on. Never give up hoping and never give in to anything that hurts you. Even a drenching deluge.
Very nice stimulating and supportive verse Sandra.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Very true. Whatever may happen, keep on keeping on. Never give up hoping and never give in to anything that hurts you. Even a drenching deluge.
Very nice stimulating and supportive verse Sandra.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 20 Syllable poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very amazing imagery that went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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This is a very well written 20 Syllable poem you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very amazing imagery that went well with your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for your comments and review.
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Good poem for the contest. Love the picture that goes with the post. A word of encouragement is always needed, as well as a positive attitude. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Good poem for the contest. Love the picture that goes with the post. A word of encouragement is always needed, as well as a positive attitude. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my trying to be upbeat poem.
Comment from Boogienights
I just love this, it really gives some positive advice especially during these troubled times. I love the moving picture as well. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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I just love this, it really gives some positive advice especially during these troubled times. I love the moving picture as well. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Thank you for reading and rating my poem.
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Sandra,
firstly, stunning presentation and image accompanying this fine twenty syllable poem.
Love the alliteration... drenching deluge... and then again with drown. The 'D' words have length and give more than most words... they seem to linger on the breath.
And all that aside, the message is solid advice to keep the positive attitude ruling one's mood... as choice is the one thing we do have, no matter the circumstance.
All the very best in this contest Sandra... it's surely a contender.
With our thoughts we create...
conscious choice.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Hi Sandra,
firstly, stunning presentation and image accompanying this fine twenty syllable poem.
Love the alliteration... drenching deluge... and then again with drown. The 'D' words have length and give more than most words... they seem to linger on the breath.
And all that aside, the message is solid advice to keep the positive attitude ruling one's mood... as choice is the one thing we do have, no matter the circumstance.
All the very best in this contest Sandra... it's surely a contender.
With our thoughts we create...
conscious choice.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your supportive comments and the exceptional vote. The storms will always come. That's all we can do is keep our heads firmly grounded in hope during life's storms. Thank you.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Sandra.
-You have used your 20 syllables well with a good topic.
-I like the opening line containing good advice and message.
-Effective imagery and alliteration describing the deluge.
-A very good message about not giving up hope, regardless of what might be facing you.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Sandra.
-You have used your 20 syllables well with a good topic.
-I like the opening line containing good advice and message.
-Effective imagery and alliteration describing the deluge.
-A very good message about not giving up hope, regardless of what might be facing you.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your comments and review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from jenintorre
Wow! what stunning artwork you have chosen and I found your 20 syllable poem quite profound. I wish you lots of luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Wow! what stunning artwork you have chosen and I found your 20 syllable poem quite profound. I wish you lots of luck in the competition.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your comments and review.
Comment from karenina
Stunning image! Followed by the best possible advice any twenty syllables could ever offer...
We can't avoid the storms of life but we can darn sure rage righteously against them!
Karenina
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Stunning image! Followed by the best possible advice any twenty syllables could ever offer...
We can't avoid the storms of life but we can darn sure rage righteously against them!
Karenina
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your comments and review. Loved this section of your review~rage righteousl
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You are most welcome!
