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"The Gift of Life 2003"

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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You've shared another well thought out poem. I thought the word choices were excellent again. And I enjoyed the message of your poem. Keep up the great work.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
    I think you Michael and my latest post is very extremely long for it is a true story.
    "When Time Tis No More?"
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Sanku
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You have reached the ultimate in human life. A stage when you know what you are and what your purpose of life is .I remember reading about organndonation in many poems of yours...very deeply done...

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
    Deeper to come but how deep can we go?
    Thanks Sanku.
    Doctor Ricky
Comment from Fleedleflump
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We can only be the mortal beings we find ourselves inhabiting and I love how this truth infuses your piece and draws it in the shape of love and belonging.

Mike

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
    Thanks Micheal.
    Mortality?
    So short..
    So precious.
    Doctor Ricky1024