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Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
You've shared another well thought out poem. I thought the word choices were excellent again. And I enjoyed the message of your poem. Keep up the great work.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2022
I think you Michael and my latest post is very extremely long for it is a true story.
"When Time Tis No More?"
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from
Sanku
You have reached the ultimate in human life. A stage when you know what you are and what your purpose of life is .I remember reading about organndonation in many poems of yours...very deeply done...
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
Deeper to come but how deep can we go?
Thanks Sanku.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from
Fleedleflump
We can only be the mortal beings we find ourselves inhabiting and I love how this truth infuses your piece and draws it in the shape of love and belonging.
Mike
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
Thanks Micheal.
Mortality?
So short..
So precious.
Doctor Ricky1024
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