The PJ Sisters
What happens to a lifetime of pajama's4 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Von
A sweet imaginative story. It is a well-written, engaging piece with solid transitions. The artwork wonderfully supports your story. Thank you for your work.
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A sweet imaginative story. It is a well-written, engaging piece with solid transitions. The artwork wonderfully supports your story. Thank you for your work.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
Comment from Teri7
This is such a cute and very well written story about the PJ sisters. After reading your story I now know what happened to all my PJ's as I was growing up. That must have been what my grandmother used to make quilts. lol Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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This is such a cute and very well written story about the PJ sisters. After reading your story I now know what happened to all my PJ's as I was growing up. That must have been what my grandmother used to make quilts. lol Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2022
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Thank you Teri for the five star review.
Comment from leather
I was confused at the start of this story because I didn't know that Pansy PJ wasn't the name of a person, but it seemed like Portia, Polly, Patty, Petunia, Pinky, and Piper were sisters of Pansy PJ--so it was a bit of a rough start. It took me a while to figure out all the references, and I'm an adult. This might also be confusing to a child. Perhaps there is some way that the start of the story could have a little more clarity.
You made a good effort, and this piece is free of grammar and spelling problems.
Best wishes.
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I was confused at the start of this story because I didn't know that Pansy PJ wasn't the name of a person, but it seemed like Portia, Polly, Patty, Petunia, Pinky, and Piper were sisters of Pansy PJ--so it was a bit of a rough start. It took me a while to figure out all the references, and I'm an adult. This might also be confusing to a child. Perhaps there is some way that the start of the story could have a little more clarity.
You made a good effort, and this piece is free of grammar and spelling problems.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
Comment from leather
I was confused at the start of this story because I didn't know that Pansy PJ wasn't the name of a person, but it seemed like Portia, Polly, Patty, Petunia, Pinky, and Piper were sisters of Pansy PJ--so it was a bit of a rough start. It took me a while to figure out all the references, and I'm an adult. This might also be confusing to a child. Perhaps there is some way that the start of the story could have a little more clarity.
You made a good effort, and this piece is free of grammar and spelling problems.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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I was confused at the start of this story because I didn't know that Pansy PJ wasn't the name of a person, but it seemed like Portia, Polly, Patty, Petunia, Pinky, and Piper were sisters of Pansy PJ--so it was a bit of a rough start. It took me a while to figure out all the references, and I'm an adult. This might also be confusing to a child. Perhaps there is some way that the start of the story could have a little more clarity.
You made a good effort, and this piece is free of grammar and spelling problems.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Thank you for the review.