Grand Bazaar Istanbul
An insight into the operation of the Bazaar13 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for sharing this delightful travel post. I am glad you learned how to negotiate with the merchants in Istanbul. I remember some "shuks" in Israel. The whole negotiations and large crowds are things I'd avoid but glad you could make the most of it! Congratulations on the win!
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Thanks for sharing this delightful travel post. I am glad you learned how to negotiate with the merchants in Istanbul. I remember some "shuks" in Israel. The whole negotiations and large crowds are things I'd avoid but glad you could make the most of it! Congratulations on the win!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Oct-2022
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Comment from Tpa
Congratulations on the contest. The story was interesting and informative.
Like some merchants, they have shady practices, hence the slogan: Buyers Beware. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Congratulations on the contest. The story was interesting and informative.
Like some merchants, they have shady practices, hence the slogan: Buyers Beware. Excellent job.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Comment from Gunner Lil
Love the sensory descriptions in your essay. An easy read with a nice flow and pace. Like the bartering for a good deal for both the buyer and seller.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Love the sensory descriptions in your essay. An easy read with a nice flow and pace. Like the bartering for a good deal for both the buyer and seller.
Thank you.
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Congratulations on your win, Thesis. You described that unique
place well. I enjoyed reading it but would never go there. It would
be too dangerous--esp for women. I liked what you said about the
vendor accepting y our price, though you probably overpaid for it.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Congratulations on your win, Thesis. You described that unique
place well. I enjoyed reading it but would never go there. It would
be too dangerous--esp for women. I liked what you said about the
vendor accepting y our price, though you probably overpaid for it.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 09-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Comment from Bill Schott
This essay, Grand Bazaar Istanbul, is a neat mini-tour of the famous atmosphere of the Grand Bazaar. Having haggled around the world, the negotiation process is entertaining, especially if you think you came out ahead.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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This essay, Grand Bazaar Istanbul, is a neat mini-tour of the famous atmosphere of the Grand Bazaar. Having haggled around the world, the negotiation process is entertaining, especially if you think you came out ahead.
Comment Written 08-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Sense of Place Short Story writing prompt Contest. You grasped the short story form well. Nice picture of the bazaars that complimentsthe story. Your descriptive words flow well expressing clear mental imagery of Istanbul and markets. It sounds like bartering is fun. I would love to visit.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Excellent entry for the Sense of Place Short Story writing prompt Contest. You grasped the short story form well. Nice picture of the bazaars that complimentsthe story. Your descriptive words flow well expressing clear mental imagery of Istanbul and markets. It sounds like bartering is fun. I would love to visit.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Comment from Susan Newell
I found this story fascinating, and as you indicate in your opening -- timeless, and perhaps universal in the lesser developed world. You did an excellent job of recreating the ambience with words. I have seen the same in Peru and Mexico. I'm always a little put off with the use of "they" to represent an individual, though I know it is common usage. I think you could do just as well by using a male merchant (he) and female customer (she).
Sue
looks hurt and slightly offended and discussed the item's attributes, countering with a slightly lower price. ==> discusses
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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I found this story fascinating, and as you indicate in your opening -- timeless, and perhaps universal in the lesser developed world. You did an excellent job of recreating the ambience with words. I have seen the same in Peru and Mexico. I'm always a little put off with the use of "they" to represent an individual, though I know it is common usage. I think you could do just as well by using a male merchant (he) and female customer (she).
Sue
looks hurt and slightly offended and discussed the item's attributes, countering with a slightly lower price. ==> discusses
Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your kind words and suggestions.
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You are most welcome. You also got my vote.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Maybe just maybe the Bazaar is the training center for used car salesmen. Have you ever left a lot with keys in hand not thinking I could have gotten it for less/ ...................
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Maybe just maybe the Bazaar is the training center for used car salesmen. Have you ever left a lot with keys in hand not thinking I could have gotten it for less/ ...................
Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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LOL, Good point. Thanks for the analogy.
Comment from LisaMay
Your story brought back some wonderful memories for me. I share your love of Turkey and its people. You've described the Grand Bazaar really well. I think the haggling process is quite daunting, but once I entered into the spirit of it I certainly enjoyed 'the game' and the hospitality was always delightful. Istanbul would have to be one of the most interesting cities in the world.
I haven't lived in Turkey but I spent several weeks travelling by motorbike through the country, and here in New Zealand I have Turkish friends.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Your story brought back some wonderful memories for me. I share your love of Turkey and its people. You've described the Grand Bazaar really well. I think the haggling process is quite daunting, but once I entered into the spirit of it I certainly enjoyed 'the game' and the hospitality was always delightful. Istanbul would have to be one of the most interesting cities in the world.
I haven't lived in Turkey but I spent several weeks travelling by motorbike through the country, and here in New Zealand I have Turkish friends.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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Comment from K. Lang-Slattery
This essay about the Bazaar in Istanbul is well written and I like the way you have described so fully the bartering process. What I am missing is some more colorful details, and a hint of the smells and the energy in the market. A personal more personal point of view (first person, or even first person present) would really make the description come alive. I was enchanted by the venders who sweep through the market selling goods without a license.
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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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This essay about the Bazaar in Istanbul is well written and I like the way you have described so fully the bartering process. What I am missing is some more colorful details, and a hint of the smells and the energy in the market. A personal more personal point of view (first person, or even first person present) would really make the description come alive. I was enchanted by the venders who sweep through the market selling goods without a license.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2022
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