Right is Might!
Rightness implies Truth, and Truth mirrors God!30 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. It's very simple but well written and speaks loud and clearly. It says a lot. I enjoyed reading and agree. If we have God with us, we don't need anything else. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. It's very simple but well written and speaks loud and clearly. It says a lot. I enjoyed reading and agree. If we have God with us, we don't need anything else. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hello Barbara.Wilkey,
Thank you very much for so NICE and UPLIFTING comments backed by Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry has a great message within it, RP.
Anyone can, and many do, shout about what is right
or their rights. However, they fail to understand the
implications of just talk and not action. If one is right
with God, then s/h knows the truth.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes
in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Your contest entry has a great message within it, RP.
Anyone can, and many do, shout about what is right
or their rights. However, they fail to understand the
implications of just talk and not action. If one is right
with God, then s/h knows the truth.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes
in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hello Jan,
Thank you very much for so NICE and UPLIFTING comments backed by Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nicely written Good work.
Can't go with your theme, though.
The meek will inherit the earth (what's gonna be left of it, anyway.)
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Nicely written Good work.
Can't go with your theme, though.
The meek will inherit the earth (what's gonna be left of it, anyway.)
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hello Wayne Fowler,
Thank you very much for reading, reviewing, and expressing Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork, RP.
-A good opening with the lady who called out in the crowd.
-It sounds like this lady had the ability to quiet "the fuming crowd."
-Good transition to the next section when silence fell over the group, and you remembered what your wife used to say.
-You used effective description in the closing section, and end with a very good question.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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-Nice artwork, RP.
-A good opening with the lady who called out in the crowd.
-It sounds like this lady had the ability to quiet "the fuming crowd."
-Good transition to the next section when silence fell over the group, and you remembered what your wife used to say.
-You used effective description in the closing section, and end with a very good question.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hello Pam,
Thank you very much for detailed review, so NICE and UPLIFTING comments backed by Good Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You are very welcome, RP, and I appreciate your reply.
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Hi Pam,
It's so kind of you.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Best wishes to you, RP!
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Most Welcome, Pam!
Wishing you the same to you,
~ RP
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Most Welcome, Pam!
Wishing you the same to you,
~ RP
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a well-done piece for the contest. I understand and enjoy the confidence behind your words and in your writing. Excellent addition to the outstanding talent on this site. Best, JohnC.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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This is a well-done piece for the contest. I understand and enjoy the confidence behind your words and in your writing. Excellent addition to the outstanding talent on this site. Best, JohnC.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hello JohnC,
Thank you very much for so NICE and UPLIFTING comments backed by Best of Luck in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Wendy G
You are exactly right. The only problem is when some people assume they are right, and that they have the truth - without checking God's word and character first. Best wishes for your entry in the Flash Contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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You are exactly right. The only problem is when some people assume they are right, and that they have the truth - without checking God's word and character first. Best wishes for your entry in the Flash Contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hello Wendy G,
Thank you very much for reading, reviewing, and expressing your own views backed by best wishes for the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Fleedleflump
It's interesting how words present, isn't it? I've always felt that righteousness implies arrogance and deceit, as it tends to be shouted in a way designed to drown out dissent. That's not a criticism of your well-written piece, of course. Words mean different things to different audiences, which is why there's no one true way of life that works for everyone.
Mike
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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It's interesting how words present, isn't it? I've always felt that righteousness implies arrogance and deceit, as it tends to be shouted in a way designed to drown out dissent. That's not a criticism of your well-written piece, of course. Words mean different things to different audiences, which is why there's no one true way of life that works for everyone.
Mike
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hello Mike,
Thank you very much for reading, reviewing, and expressing your own views.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This is an interesting Flash for the 80 word Flash Fiction contest. My slight problem with it was that I couldn't clearly find the twist in the tail. Kate xx
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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This is an interesting Flash for the 80 word Flash Fiction contest. My slight problem with it was that I couldn't clearly find the twist in the tail. Kate xx
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hello Kate xx,
Thank you very much for reading, reviewing, and expressing your own views.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
With God in mind and spirit, you will stay on the right path. He takes care of those who believe. There are many things that we may question. However, he has reasons why things happen. For one, he needs angels and chooses those he knows are true ones. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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With God in mind and spirit, you will stay on the right path. He takes care of those who believe. There are many things that we may question. However, he has reasons why things happen. For one, he needs angels and chooses those he knows are true ones. Thank you for sharing.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hello Carolyn Dooley,
Thank you very much for reading, reviewing, and expressing your own views.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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You are welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Very true. There is no mightier "backer" than God Himself. And we should not be on any human organization or nation's side but we should all be on His side. Great story! Best wishes in the contest!
One suggestion of word order:
it means with us is God (it means God is with us)
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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Very true. There is no mightier "backer" than God Himself. And we should not be on any human organization or nation's side but we should all be on His side. Great story! Best wishes in the contest!
One suggestion of word order:
it means with us is God (it means God is with us)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Hello Lyenochka,
Thank you very much for so NICE and UPLIFTING comments backed by best wishes in the contest.
With best wishes,
~ RP
