Thirst
A Short Story Poem.2 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
Very good, interesting and well written. Some lines made me think, which I am capable of rising to upon occasion. The first line was my favorite. Very good job. Keep it up!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Very good, interesting and well written. Some lines made me think, which I am capable of rising to upon occasion. The first line was my favorite. Very good job. Keep it up!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Thanks again Douglas for stopping by and you honoring me for this one.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I know its sound harsh, but in the circle of life each of us has a different part to play. Some are coming, but staying just a short moment and then go back to God's arms and watch over there from heaven. I understand your grief, will never go away, but you need to let him go and be your guardian angel.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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I know its sound harsh, but in the circle of life each of us has a different part to play. Some are coming, but staying just a short moment and then go back to God's arms and watch over there from heaven. I understand your grief, will never go away, but you need to let him go and be your guardian angel.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2022
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Yes I understand grief and that's why I journal it.
And, that's because it's extremely healthy.
But when it comes time to let go.
Yes, will be the time when I'm finally again with my loved ones.
"Lest We Never Forget 9-11"
Doctor Ricky 1024