You Say I'm Wrong
See yourself through someone else's eyes5 total reviews
Comment from writer723
This is a very beautiful song. I enjoyed reading your entry. It's nice to be able to see ourselves throught the lens of another person. Best wishes in the contest. I'm sure you'll do quite well.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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This is a very beautiful song. I enjoyed reading your entry. It's nice to be able to see ourselves throught the lens of another person. Best wishes in the contest. I'm sure you'll do quite well.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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That's a very nice comment to make, and it touched me. Thank you for this lovely review.
Comment from lyenochka
What beautiful encouragement! Yes, with someone to cheer and encourage like this song's writer in their lives, one can keep trying to overcome the things in life the can "misshapen" our hearts. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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What beautiful encouragement! Yes, with someone to cheer and encourage like this song's writer in their lives, one can keep trying to overcome the things in life the can "misshapen" our hearts. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you. You have the loveliest way of always "understanding" the gist of people's writings on here. I always appreciate your encouraging reviews.
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Thanks for being such a lovely encourager to so many around you and here!
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
This is a well-written poem/lyrics. The message is clearly presented. I am glad it can be easily read with the large font size. The visual fits well.
Bring the first verse down one space from the bottom of the visual for better balance. It would be good also to label the verses and the repeated chorus, so it appears more like a song. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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This is a well-written poem/lyrics. The message is clearly presented. I am glad it can be easily read with the large font size. The visual fits well.
Bring the first verse down one space from the bottom of the visual for better balance. It would be good also to label the verses and the repeated chorus, so it appears more like a song. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Good suggestions, as always. Thank you.
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You are most welcome. It was a good read.
Comment from Dr. Von
This poem is beautifully written. I enjoyed your map of encouragement. Every line supported your purpose of addressing the human feeling of self-doughty with a request to grow. Great work.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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This poem is beautifully written. I enjoyed your map of encouragement. Every line supported your purpose of addressing the human feeling of self-doughty with a request to grow. Great work.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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What a super sweet review this is! Thank you very, very much.
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You are welcome.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Thank you for sharing this touching writing with us on FanStory. It appears your friend has had some kind of a challenging relationship and needs all the help she can get. Nicely done. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you for sharing this touching writing with us on FanStory. It appears your friend has had some kind of a challenging relationship and needs all the help she can get. Nicely done. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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She actually is SUPER capable and has handled every last thing that was thrown at her with SUCH strength and aplomb...yet, curiously, she rejects the idea that she is strong. So my hope is that this gives her another jolt of reassurance.
Thank you for this very nice review. I appreciate it very much.
