Goblins at Work
A turning point.11 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Well, that'll show those pesky goblins, right, Leather?
I enjoyed your fun contest entry. Your words flowed
smoothly with a bit of rhyme rum/gum' he/tea/razor,
hair, scare. The twist at the end was unexpected but
worked. The picture was perfect.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Well, that'll show those pesky goblins, right, Leather?
I enjoyed your fun contest entry. Your words flowed
smoothly with a bit of rhyme rum/gum' he/tea/razor,
hair, scare. The twist at the end was unexpected but
worked. The picture was perfect.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Yep. You're right, Jan. Those pesky goblins got their comeuppance.
Thanks for your review and all the stars. I'm glad you enjoyed this little read.
