Recital
Winter storm.4 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, your poem is filled with vivid imagery. In 17 syllables, you have created a complete scene. With or without the photo, I can see it and I can hear it. I especially liked:
harsh winter winds are howling
(Good alliteration and imagery)
As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Hello author, your poem is filled with vivid imagery. In 17 syllables, you have created a complete scene. With or without the photo, I can see it and I can hear it. I especially liked:
harsh winter winds are howling
(Good alliteration and imagery)
As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for that lovely review.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Author,
Your excellent poem gave me images of desolate winter days and nights that I dread.
Winter nights have their own sound, like you describe.
Great 5-7-5 poem.
Good luck
Blessings, Cindy
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Author,
Your excellent poem gave me images of desolate winter days and nights that I dread.
Winter nights have their own sound, like you describe.
Great 5-7-5 poem.
Good luck
Blessings, Cindy
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Yes they do, eerie. Thanks for the review.
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You?re welcome, author. Great ambiance poem.
Good luck
Comment from prettybluebirds
Your poem is lovely and well-written. I can almost feel the approaching storm when I read your words. The picture is remarkable and perfect for the subject of your writing. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Your poem is lovely and well-written. I can almost feel the approaching storm when I read your words. The picture is remarkable and perfect for the subject of your writing. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much.
Comment from Fleedleflump
I love the progression in this - subtle personification with the trees dancing with the clouds, the revelation the Winter's wind is the choreographer, then the realisation that a storm is funding the whole project :-)
Mike
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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I love the progression in this - subtle personification with the trees dancing with the clouds, the revelation the Winter's wind is the choreographer, then the realisation that a storm is funding the whole project :-)
Mike
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Your words are apprciated.
