Witness
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Leaves of Laurel"Modern struggle in another world.
3 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
About the only fantasy writer I read with any regularity is Amarha, but I certainly pain to read more of your posts in the future. Outstanding, descriptive writing. Thanks for sharing. I'm truly sorry that I don't have a six to reward your fine piece as it deserves.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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About the only fantasy writer I read with any regularity is Amarha, but I certainly pain to read more of your posts in the future. Outstanding, descriptive writing. Thanks for sharing. I'm truly sorry that I don't have a six to reward your fine piece as it deserves.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing it. I don't know Amarha, but I will have to check out their work. I appreciate your time and I hope you have an awesome day (again).
Comment from Shirley McLain
Excellent chapter to march this story forward. You did a great job as usual. I didn't see any errors. Your last three lines let us know to anticipate trouble in the ranks. Have a wonderful evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Excellent chapter to march this story forward. You did a great job as usual. I didn't see any errors. Your last three lines let us know to anticipate trouble in the ranks. Have a wonderful evening. Shirley
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it and I'm grateful for your time. I hope you have a wonderful day.
Comment from Dr. Von
The character descriptions were great. Having a character ledger helped make this offering clear and engaging. Your phrasing conveyed the tensions of war. Thank you for the undercurrent of conflict in politics. I like the story. You have positioned this chapter well for the next. Good solid read.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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The character descriptions were great. Having a character ledger helped make this offering clear and engaging. Your phrasing conveyed the tensions of war. Thank you for the undercurrent of conflict in politics. I like the story. You have positioned this chapter well for the next. Good solid read.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it and I'm grateful for your time. I hope you have a wonderful day.
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You are welcome.
