The Heart of God
A prayer from my heart to God.4 total reviews
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
I really like, "I was not there at the beginning, but a memory of me was in your heart." Very reminiscent of Jeremiah 1:5
Para 2, 4th sentence: Remove one space between (forgiveness.) and (Some)
Very nice personal conversation with our Lord.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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I really like, "I was not there at the beginning, but a memory of me was in your heart." Very reminiscent of Jeremiah 1:5
Para 2, 4th sentence: Remove one space between (forgiveness.) and (Some)
Very nice personal conversation with our Lord.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Gary. :) I'm pleased you liked it.
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Your letter is beautiful, loving and sincere. None of us is perfect, but we serve a perfect Savior, and we seek to grow closer to Him, as we walk with Him.
I made a few suggestions pertaining to grammar and usage:
One has to believe in you always not only in time of need.
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One has to believe in you always; not only in time of need.
I believe in you Father and in your Son.
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I believe in you, Father, and in your Son.
Respectively Yours
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Respectfully Yours,
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Reverentially Yours,
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Lovingly Yours,
[whatever you're comfortable with]
I'm not sure why you signed it "A Wayward Son" when you said, in the previous paragraph, that you belong to God... maybe you were once wayward? Many of us were. But it's your letter, so do whatever you feel is best. I like so much that you thank Him for His love.
God bless you!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Your letter is beautiful, loving and sincere. None of us is perfect, but we serve a perfect Savior, and we seek to grow closer to Him, as we walk with Him.
I made a few suggestions pertaining to grammar and usage:
One has to believe in you always not only in time of need.
-->
One has to believe in you always; not only in time of need.
I believe in you Father and in your Son.
-->
I believe in you, Father, and in your Son.
Respectively Yours
-->
Respectfully Yours,
OR
Reverentially Yours,
OR
Lovingly Yours,
[whatever you're comfortable with]
I'm not sure why you signed it "A Wayward Son" when you said, in the previous paragraph, that you belong to God... maybe you were once wayward? Many of us were. But it's your letter, so do whatever you feel is best. I like so much that you thank Him for His love.
God bless you!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Mary Kay. :) I correct my errors.
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You're very welcome, poetwatch. I'm happy to help. May God bless you.
- Mary Kay
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done! Great use of the prompt to create a message to God. I love how you ended this not knowing what will happen tomorrow but confident that He is there for you. Very well written and a moving message.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Nicely done! Great use of the prompt to create a message to God. I love how you ended this not knowing what will happen tomorrow but confident that He is there for you. Very well written and a moving message.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Michael. I just wrote what my heart told me to write. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
An honest write from the heart and forgiving oneself is the first step in forgiving others and I expect your prayers will be answered here, I enjoyed your endearing story, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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An honest write from the heart and forgiving oneself is the first step in forgiving others and I expect your prayers will be answered here, I enjoyed your endearing story, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Dolly. :) I found out a long time ago that writing to the heart is always pleasing.