The Gift
Man frets over a gift.44 total reviews
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Great story. Great gift. Well written.
Seven acres on Wye Mountain in Arkansas has thousands of daffodils. You ought to see them.
Be nice if Leigh could 'see' his Butterfly among the flowers some day.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Great story. Great gift. Well written.
Seven acres on Wye Mountain in Arkansas has thousands of daffodils. You ought to see them.
Be nice if Leigh could 'see' his Butterfly among the flowers some day.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Wayne, I had heard about Wye Mountain. Thank you for your review. Terry.
Comment from Fleedleflump
This is beautiful, Terry. I wish I could leave it at that, because it's everything I want to say. It's a story within a scene, which I like, and the gentle reveal of the original protagonist being Leigh is deftly, emotionally handled.
I loved it.
Mike
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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This is beautiful, Terry. I wish I could leave it at that, because it's everything I want to say. It's a story within a scene, which I like, and the gentle reveal of the original protagonist being Leigh is deftly, emotionally handled.
I loved it.
Mike
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Mike, thank you for the six stars and your very kind review! Terry.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I found most of this confusing starting with the opening sentence because it led me to believe it was he needing a gift. Then, the subjects changed and I was in San Antone walking with a love but in the end with a son as well, and what of the butterfly at the end. I must be missing somethings.
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reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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I found most of this confusing starting with the opening sentence because it led me to believe it was he needing a gift. Then, the subjects changed and I was in San Antone walking with a love but in the end with a son as well, and what of the butterfly at the end. I must be missing somethings.
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Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Tom, there is River Walk in San Antonio. A few hundred miles north in the Town of Flower Mound is a River Walk as well. It Is about three years old. I lived in Flower Mound for over twenty years with my wife, who was a Master Gardener. Thank you for reading. Terry.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
AHHHH!!!! This is a lovely story that warmed my heart. I loved it. Thank you for sharing this wonderfully romantic and filled with unconditional love story with us. My entire day is going to be great because I read this story this morning.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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AHHHH!!!! This is a lovely story that warmed my heart. I loved it. Thank you for sharing this wonderfully romantic and filled with unconditional love story with us. My entire day is going to be great because I read this story this morning.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Barbara, thank you for the six stars, and most kind review! Terry.
