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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well written. Love the description of the sea and your unique way of sharing the beauty and joy of being by it. Great job yet again.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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I thought this was well written. Love the description of the sea and your unique way of sharing the beauty and joy of being by it. Great job yet again.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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I'm enjoying writing this book now and it still won't be finished after two summers.
Thanks Michael.
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Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a Mega Capital Casino as the proverbial "salt of the earth."
The work highlights its twin functional perspective of taking a peaceful outlook in the winter season, while coming alive and vibrant in summer.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of rhymes, alliterations, metaphors, and imagery.
Exceptional work. Keep the flag flying.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a Mega Capital Casino as the proverbial "salt of the earth."
The work highlights its twin functional perspective of taking a peaceful outlook in the winter season, while coming alive and vibrant in summer.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of rhymes, alliterations, metaphors, and imagery.
Exceptional work. Keep the flag flying.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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This is eventually going into a book I started in 2017 entitled, "Beautiful Poetry from Long Beach Island,
New Jersey"
Thanks Lloyd.
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Remain Blessed.