Winner's Touch
The taste of possibly winning at last26 total reviews
Comment from Jay Squires
I love doing this, Nolan! I had to dig deep, but I found a piece that is only one shy of ATB. And what surprises me is that it didn't already achieve it. We are all, I think, under the surface, wanting to reach for the trophy, for first place, to be recognized for who we truly are. Others have walked away with the prize who were less worthy. Anyway, you'll always have me in your audience, holding my lit Zippo aloft.
Jay
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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I love doing this, Nolan! I had to dig deep, but I found a piece that is only one shy of ATB. And what surprises me is that it didn't already achieve it. We are all, I think, under the surface, wanting to reach for the trophy, for first place, to be recognized for who we truly are. Others have walked away with the prize who were less worthy. Anyway, you'll always have me in your audience, holding my lit Zippo aloft.
Jay
Comment Written 19-Dec-2022
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2022
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Jay, I cannot thank you enough. For me there is no bigger thrill than to learn that someone you admire, also likes what you do. From the very bottom of my heart to the absolute top of it, I thank you.
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You are more than welcome, Nolan. You are already a winner in my books!
Jay
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Stop. You are too kind to one with limited skills and abilities, but an undying desire to achieve ever higher goals.
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Hahaha! I'd be a blathering fool not to allow you to stop there!
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
What a perfect poem for this contest! I love it and wish you all the best in the contest. And you gloat? You have too much humility in your heart and a graciousness that is such a rare quality to have. And lucky me that I am blessed to have a winner like you as a friend. Awesome poem and as far as I an concerned, this Minute poem is so deserving, so get ready for that virtual trophy.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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What a perfect poem for this contest! I love it and wish you all the best in the contest. And you gloat? You have too much humility in your heart and a graciousness that is such a rare quality to have. And lucky me that I am blessed to have a winner like you as a friend. Awesome poem and as far as I an concerned, this Minute poem is so deserving, so get ready for that virtual trophy.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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You are far too kind. I love having a champion on my side to sing my underserved song of praise. Thank you my dear friend.
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, oh, go ahead and gloat a little, maybe a lot! This is a very fun entry for this contest, best wishes for the win! You wrote a nice poem that takes me back to school days and ends with enough humor to make me laugh in old age. Well-done. Terry.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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LOL, oh, go ahead and gloat a little, maybe a lot! This is a very fun entry for this contest, best wishes for the win! You wrote a nice poem that takes me back to school days and ends with enough humor to make me laugh in old age. Well-done. Terry.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2022
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Thank you more than I have the words to express. I was totally outside my comfort zone on this one. I went back and forth and round and round trying to deal with all the suggested changes to make the poem conform to the stated rules. I had to finally stop accepting suggestions, and stand pat with the poem as it stood in that final moment.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Nami,
I love this poem. It is short and sweet, but powerful.
I believe it is a good lesson in confidence.
I hope you are well and happy.
Good luck in the contest!
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Nami,
I love this poem. It is short and sweet, but powerful.
I believe it is a good lesson in confidence.
I hope you are well and happy.
Good luck in the contest!
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thank you Cindy. I appreciate your very fine comments and encouragement.
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You?re welcome, Nomi.
Have a great Sunday.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment from Bill Schott
This minute poem, Winner's Touch, reminds us that we can be anything we are motivated enough to pursue. If you can see it, you can be it. A great mentor is the magic bullet as well.
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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This minute poem, Winner's Touch, reminds us that we can be anything we are motivated enough to pursue. If you can see it, you can be it. A great mentor is the magic bullet as well.
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 05-Sep-2022
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Wow Bill. I had no idea that you could be so eloquent. You frighten me. I had momentarily forgotten that books can sometime have misleading covers. Until you open them up and taker a good and careful look inside, you might be missing something important. I appreciate you my brother. Even if you are a Marine. Hoorah!!!!!
Comment from Dawn Munro
I love the minute format, and you have done it justice, IMHO. I especially liked the ending line in your final stanza -- it makes me smile -- in fact, I'll be smiling all morning.
Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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I love the minute format, and you have done it justice, IMHO. I especially liked the ending line in your final stanza -- it makes me smile -- in fact, I'll be smiling all morning.
Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much. Your support is everything and I appreciate it.
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You're very welcome. :)
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Thank you so much. Your kindness will never be forgotten. Please know that I deeply appreciate your gracious remarks.
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading your poetry. I like the description you have written about winners. It is interesting and entertaining. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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I have enjoyed reading your poetry. I like the description you have written about winners. It is interesting and entertaining. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you good buddy. I know that I can always count on your support and I appreciate that.
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You're welcome!
Comment from GWHARGIS
I think everyone wants to win. Your poetic ode to winning was quite captivating. The verse flowed nicely and was playful enough to keep the reader feeling a bit less guilty wanting the big win. Nice job.
Gretchen
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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I think everyone wants to win. Your poetic ode to winning was quite captivating. The verse flowed nicely and was playful enough to keep the reader feeling a bit less guilty wanting the big win. Nice job.
Gretchen
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you and I bear no ill will toward whomever wins.
Comment from evilynne
Well, I certainly hope your poem can win. I'm in the "never won" club. Your work appears well written; it states your case well. Best of luck! Evi
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Well, I certainly hope your poem can win. I'm in the "never won" club. Your work appears well written; it states your case well. Best of luck! Evi
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you Evi. Win or lose, I am already a winner to have gained so many well wishers.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Since I'm not a poet, I had to read the requirements of a Minute Poem. When I read your poem, I see you hit all the markers, which requires creativity and thought. I love the subject of your poem. It expresses the feelings of every writer who has ever entered a contest on this site. I wish you the best. This may be your time.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Since I'm not a poet, I had to read the requirements of a Minute Poem. When I read your poem, I see you hit all the markers, which requires creativity and thought. I love the subject of your poem. It expresses the feelings of every writer who has ever entered a contest on this site. I wish you the best. This may be your time.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much. As I stated earlier in the previous review comments. I am already a winner in that I have amassed a large number of well wishers.
