The Turnaround
Mirror Poem using T11 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Your skilful use of alliteration in imparting a transformational message has created this winning poem. Well done - congratulations.
Thoughtful touch = kind konnexion
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Your skilful use of alliteration in imparting a transformational message has created this winning poem. Well done - congratulations.
Thoughtful touch = kind konnexion
Comment Written 07-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much for your review and congratulations - especially since it has expired.
Wendy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
It works. Meets the requirements as far as I can tell. Good luck.
I get the drift totally. Nice work.
Now what to do for me to meet the requirement of one hundred and fifty of them (characters) I find that a chore and largely unnecessary,
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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It works. Meets the requirements as far as I can tell. Good luck.
I get the drift totally. Nice work.
Now what to do for me to meet the requirement of one hundred and fifty of them (characters) I find that a chore and largely unnecessary,
Comment Written 04-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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I agree. Just press the space bar twenty or thirty times! Thanks for reviewing and for your good wishes.
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Your suggestions works on my desk top but not fo my Apple Ipad.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Mirror Alphabet Poem! The words of this poem flow and connect well. The last line turns the lines above around with a positive outlook.
I really like the last line especially the word transformed. Thank you for
the author's notes - they are so true!
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Excellent Mirror Alphabet Poem! The words of this poem flow and connect well. The last line turns the lines above around with a positive outlook.
I really like the last line especially the word transformed. Thank you for
the author's notes - they are so true!
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for your lovely words. Greatly appreciated!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When a negative turns into a positive then we are thankful and bullies are often jealous of our talents and want to stamp on us as they feel threatened by us. Loving the alliteration and well chosen words here as this rolls off the tongue cleverly, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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When a negative turns into a positive then we are thankful and bullies are often jealous of our talents and want to stamp on us as they feel threatened by us. Loving the alliteration and well chosen words here as this rolls off the tongue cleverly, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Comment from Aussie
Really liked this one. Lots of T's and a good ending. We all have bad days and wonder if it will ever turn around. Patience is the key. "Fear, the only way out is through."
Keep on writing my friend. K XX
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Really liked this one. Lots of T's and a good ending. We all have bad days and wonder if it will ever turn around. Patience is the key. "Fear, the only way out is through."
Keep on writing my friend. K XX
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much Aussie. I'm glad you liked it!
Comment from Anne Johnston
this is a good entry for the contest, meets requirements for word count on each line, and last line is opposite to the subject. Torment turns into thankfulness. Very well done
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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this is a good entry for the contest, meets requirements for word count on each line, and last line is opposite to the subject. Torment turns into thankfulness. Very well done
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much Anne. I'm glad you liked it.
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You are welcome
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Author,
now this is a tongue twister.
You have created a great mirror alphabet poem for this contest.
Love the alliteration all the way through... but none better than...
Thoughtful touch turns tables...
Yes, it does!
Well done, and all the very best in this contest Author.
With our thoughts we create...
tender times.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Hi Author,
now this is a tongue twister.
You have created a great mirror alphabet poem for this contest.
Love the alliteration all the way through... but none better than...
Thoughtful touch turns tables...
Yes, it does!
Well done, and all the very best in this contest Author.
With our thoughts we create...
tender times.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much James. I'm glad you liked it!
Comment from PENofFIRE
You did a great job of telling a story in just five lines. I loved how you turned this around with a "thoughtful touch." Sometimes that's all it takes.
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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You did a great job of telling a story in just five lines. I loved how you turned this around with a "thoughtful touch." Sometimes that's all it takes.
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice presentation and topic.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You did a good job with the poem and beginingn descriptive words.
-I like how you make a turn with "thoughtful touch."
-A good closing line that shows the outcome of being thoughtful.
-A good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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-Nice presentation and topic.
-Your note is appreciated.
-You did a good job with the poem and beginingn descriptive words.
-I like how you make a turn with "thoughtful touch."
-A good closing line that shows the outcome of being thoughtful.
-A good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Thanks so much Pam. A lovely review, and thoughtful, as always.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of your work reminisces a well written mirror alphabet poem that thrives on the letter "T."
The work highlights a protagonist on the throws of torment that eventually saw the oddities as having worked for his own good.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of alliterations and imagery.
Excellent work. Bravo.
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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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The objective correlative of your work reminisces a well written mirror alphabet poem that thrives on the letter "T."
The work highlights a protagonist on the throws of torment that eventually saw the oddities as having worked for his own good.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of alliterations and imagery.
Excellent work. Bravo.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much Lloyd. I appreciate your thoughtful words.
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Remain Blessed.
