Comment from evilynne

Excellent

That's a good Haiku movie review, well written, with a good accompanying picture. I'm not sure if this contest is still pending since the work is blind but is displayed under your Portfolio. Evi

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022

Thank you!

Comment from Rachelle Allen

Excellent

You did a great job with this. In just seventeen syllables, you really did encapsulate not just the theme of the movie, but you also gave it a rating! Seriously good work! To me, this one's a big-time contender! The others fall short of the mark, but yours really met the prompt. Good luck.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022

Thank you very much! It's appreciated!

reply by Rachelle Allen on 31-Aug-2022

My pleasure!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your movie review, Mystery Author. You presented it
well. I liked the image and the well-chosen words of the review.
Your review would entice others to watch the movie.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022

Thank you!

Comment from lancellot

Good

Hmm, there not much a of review. We are only told how the writer feels or felt.
Also, this first line: Four runaway kids

That is incorrect. They were not runaways in any way. They were simply going an adventure to see a body.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022

Thank you for telling me. I have changed the review. Does it flow? Is it now good enough for a five stars rating? Please check.

Comment from Marietta Geckos

Excellent

Your review says it perfectly. Very creatively put together. Extremely well crafted, concise and fabulous. Good luck in the contest! Artwork is also perfect for this review.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022

Thank you!