Either Way
How Love May Change8 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is much truth in these words as some marriages turn sour over a period of time and what was once a marvellous love match turns out to be a union of hell, a poignant write, and I am beginning to warm to this form, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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There is much truth in these words as some marriages turn sour over a period of time and what was once a marvellous love match turns out to be a union of hell, a poignant write, and I am beginning to warm to this form, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your comments and rating.
Comment from Thomas Blanks
Great visual... It is not only your picture that moves; so do your words! Liking the lively lyrics that launch each line, which lengthen little by little. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Great visual... It is not only your picture that moves; so do your words! Liking the lively lyrics that launch each line, which lengthen little by little. Nicely done!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Thomas thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. Your exceptional rating is appreciated.
Comment from Wendy G
Very dramatic presentation - and your words ring true, as vows for life-long devotion often turn to disaster, as in your last line. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Very dramatic presentation - and your words ring true, as vows for life-long devotion often turn to disaster, as in your last line. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Thank you, Wendy, for your review.
Comment from BermyBye50
A well-wriiten entry for the Mirror Alphabet Poem contest. Your selection of the letter L for you entry is an excellent choice as your poem appears to lament how love changes over time.
Suggestion: Maybe change the last line to reads as follows:
limitlessly loathing also the possibility
Cheers,
Eugene
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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A well-wriiten entry for the Mirror Alphabet Poem contest. Your selection of the letter L for you entry is an excellent choice as your poem appears to lament how love changes over time.
Suggestion: Maybe change the last line to reads as follows:
limitlessly loathing also the possibility
Cheers,
Eugene
Comment Written 31-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Eugene, for your review and suggestion. I took your suggestion, but I thought "a' fits better than "the". I appreciate your ongoing support.
Comment from leather
You chose an excellent illustration to go with this poem--a whole heart that shatters. The red text on the black background also works so well. The twist at the end of the poem brought a smile. Well done.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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You chose an excellent illustration to go with this poem--a whole heart that shatters. The red text on the black background also works so well. The twist at the end of the poem brought a smile. Well done.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your comment and review. I love gifs.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting going from Love to the possibility of
limitless Loathing. I thought about how love is taking a risk and one never knows how it will turn out! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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The author's words are interesting going from Love to the possibility of
limitless Loathing. I thought about how love is taking a risk and one never knows how it will turn out! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome and compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your supportive comments and review.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
HAHAHAHAHA!! Yes, it does teeter on that fine line on any given day, doesn't it? This is hilarious and true and well-done verbally as well as aesthetically. Very enjoyable read, and it's a WONDERFUL contest entry. I can see this one taking it all! Good luck.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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HAHAHAHAHA!! Yes, it does teeter on that fine line on any given day, doesn't it? This is hilarious and true and well-done verbally as well as aesthetically. Very enjoyable read, and it's a WONDERFUL contest entry. I can see this one taking it all! Good luck.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Thank you for reading and rating my entry.
Comment from papa55mike
That's the chance you take with love. Either ultimate joy or limitless loathing. I love the last line. What a wonderfully written poem and a cool video.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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That's the chance you take with love. Either ultimate joy or limitless loathing. I love the last line. What a wonderfully written poem and a cool video.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 31-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your comments and rating. You too have a blessed day.
