Haiku ( upon season's change)
A 5/6/4 Haiku for the club challenge17 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Kahpot, good haiku format and imagery. I especially liked:
dry rivers flow
(Good Satori Line)
Beautiful artwork choice and presentation. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Hi Kahpot, good haiku format and imagery. I especially liked:
dry rivers flow
(Good Satori Line)
Beautiful artwork choice and presentation. Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Thank you for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Blanks
Shows what I know. I didn't know there was such a thing as a 5-6-4 haiku.
But there are a lot of things I don't know. I haven't seen a change of season or snow since I moved to south Florida in 2011. Always summer and green. There are 50 states in the United States in 2021, and 49 of the 50 got snow. Only Florida did not... because we have no mountains... We just get rain. Plenty of rain. I liked your poem.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Shows what I know. I didn't know there was such a thing as a 5-6-4 haiku.
But there are a lot of things I don't know. I haven't seen a change of season or snow since I moved to south Florida in 2011. Always summer and green. There are 50 states in the United States in 2021, and 49 of the 50 got snow. Only Florida did not... because we have no mountains... We just get rain. Plenty of rain. I liked your poem.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Thomas, here in Australia our weather is very different to America, where I live in Queensland we rarely if ever get snow, mainly sunshine, occasional rain and the yearly cyclones, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There are extremes within the seasons and the land and occupants suffer with such disasters, a fine write and I loved the colourful image too, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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There are extremes within the seasons and the land and occupants suffer with such disasters, a fine write and I loved the colourful image too, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Wendy G
Very nice, and exactly true. You've chosen a very lovely picture to accompany your fine and well-expressed Haiku words on the theme of seasons of the year.
Wendy
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Very nice, and exactly true. You've chosen a very lovely picture to accompany your fine and well-expressed Haiku words on the theme of seasons of the year.
Wendy
Comment Written 31-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from GWHARGIS
I like how you find the rivers source in this. It is the rebound of nature. Completely random things that work together. This was very lovely and such a stunning work.
Gretchen
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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I like how you find the rivers source in this. It is the rebound of nature. Completely random things that work together. This was very lovely and such a stunning work.
Gretchen
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your club response is beautiful. The image is awesome.
Your words paint their own picture for readers even if
no picture had been included. This is one of your best
haiku!
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Your club response is beautiful. The image is awesome.
Your words paint their own picture for readers even if
no picture had been included. This is one of your best
haiku!
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from royowen
Water is an essential part of life, in fact all living creatures need, it's essential from a heavenly perspective, it's the prime metaphor for cleanliness. Both from sin, and a sign of death to the old life. Beautifully written Kimbob. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Water is an essential part of life, in fact all living creatures need, it's essential from a heavenly perspective, it's the prime metaphor for cleanliness. Both from sin, and a sign of death to the old life. Beautifully written Kimbob. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Roy, for these wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
It really is a sign of the change of seasons when the dry river beds are again full of flowing water. You captured that seasonal event well and take us to the source - the melting snow on the mountains!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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It really is a sign of the change of seasons when the dry river beds are again full of flowing water. You captured that seasonal event well and take us to the source - the melting snow on the mountains!
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your very encouraging comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Upon Season's Change, presented with a 5-6-4 formatting, covers the transitional time when the ice becomes water and the dormant earth lives again.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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This haiku, Upon Season's Change, presented with a 5-6-4 formatting, covers the transitional time when the ice becomes water and the dormant earth lives again.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Kym,
I love your season haiku. You have great imagery and presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." -Atticus
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Hello, Kym,
I love your season haiku. You have great imagery and presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits to paint the unsaid." -Atticus
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you so very much, your encouraging comments are very much appreciated****kahpot
