"The Gift of Life 2003"
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Once When Upon A Time"Original Drafts
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Comment from prettybluebirds
It worked, you had me wondering why Jason was going to hell. I'm glad you put him where he belongs. This is more the type of story I'm used to seeing from you. This is another lovely tribute to your son.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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It worked, you had me wondering why Jason was going to hell. I'm glad you put him where he belongs. This is more the type of story I'm used to seeing from you. This is another lovely tribute to your son.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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I write these very rarely to make people thinking and wondering why?
To lead them in to a different place till they get to the conclusion.
Thanks again.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from kahpot
Wow! while reading this my direction and image of where you were taking me changed a couple of times, I very much enjoyed your eternal rhyme throughout this story, love your chosen artwork, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Wow! while reading this my direction and image of where you were taking me changed a couple of times, I very much enjoyed your eternal rhyme throughout this story, love your chosen artwork, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Thanks again kahpot.
Doctor Ricky1024
