Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a fun poem, Bill. Your character looks like he needs
a friend. I liked the rhyming name. With his eye, s/he won't
miss a thing. Maybe Cyclops is in her/his family tree.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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This is a fun poem, Bill. Your character looks like he needs
a friend. I liked the rhyming name. With his eye, s/he won't
miss a thing. Maybe Cyclops is in her/his family tree.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from Ulla
Oh dear, so he's still around, not helping out what is going on very much..I hope I will get a quiet time when I'm back in Gourock, Scotland, over Christmas. Ulla:)))
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Oh dear, so he's still around, not helping out what is going on very much..I hope I will get a quiet time when I'm back in Gourock, Scotland, over Christmas. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is a very cute and well written 5-6-5 poem. You used very good descriptive words and very cute imagery from the art work you chose. Reminds me of when our twins were young and they watched something about funny monsters. This reminded me of one of the monsters! Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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Bill, This is a very cute and well written 5-6-5 poem. You used very good descriptive words and very cute imagery from the art work you chose. Reminds me of when our twins were young and they watched something about funny monsters. This reminded me of one of the monsters! Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Teri
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Brett Matthew West
The poem supports the picture, although not sure how well it would stand apart.
If you are creating a new character for young readers they would probably be all for Winky N. Blinky, who resembles Cookie Monster from Sesame Street. However, it remains a clever name for him.
If his eye is on the prize there is no way, with that peeper of his, he could miss it.
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The poem supports the picture, although not sure how well it would stand apart.
If you are creating a new character for young readers they would probably be all for Winky N. Blinky, who resembles Cookie Monster from Sesame Street. However, it remains a clever name for him.
If his eye is on the prize there is no way, with that peeper of his, he could miss it.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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I should name him TED, for Thyroid Eye Disease that makes one's eyes puff up.
Comment from kahpot
Cuddly, Scary, as eye on the prize, alerts me to get out of the way, he would be winky deprived of an eyelash, very ell written with wonderful artwork****jahpot
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Cuddly, Scary, as eye on the prize, alerts me to get out of the way, he would be winky deprived of an eyelash, very ell written with wonderful artwork****jahpot
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Thanks, kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
Clever use of a different title for another member of the Cyclops family. This fellow looks like he might be looking at some cookies which most definitely is a great prize if you like cookies.
Thanks for sharing. :))
Gloria
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Clever use of a different title for another member of the Cyclops family. This fellow looks like he might be looking at some cookies which most definitely is a great prize if you like cookies.
Thanks for sharing. :))
Gloria
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Thanks, Gloria
Comment from nomi338
If one keeps his eye on the prize, he quickly comes to realize, that the goal is always within reach. When you reach for that peach, this lesson you can teach, allow each his personal reach, you will never be a leech, and you will not ever face an attempt to impeach.
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If one keeps his eye on the prize, he quickly comes to realize, that the goal is always within reach. When you reach for that peach, this lesson you can teach, allow each his personal reach, you will never be a leech, and you will not ever face an attempt to impeach.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
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Each beach we reach will fleach a treach.
Comment from BethShelby
Another one you see eye to eye with? Well just judging from what I see, I'd say he is more likely to have a softer side. He seems a little blue but I don't I'd trust him with my secrets. He has a big mouth.
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Another one you see eye to eye with? Well just judging from what I see, I'd say he is more likely to have a softer side. He seems a little blue but I don't I'd trust him with my secrets. He has a big mouth.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
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Ha ha ha. He is those things.
Comment from Sally Law
I bet your grandkids love this. A sweet and humorous poem for the child in all of us.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes with this short verse Ditty. Sal :)) XOs
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I bet your grandkids love this. A sweet and humorous poem for the child in all of us.
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes with this short verse Ditty. Sal :)) XOs
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Thanks, Sally
Comment from lyenochka
That's cute. I'm sure your younger grandchildren would have fun reading this one aloud. Good use of internal rhymes and assonance. What people missed before muppets!
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That's cute. I'm sure your younger grandchildren would have fun reading this one aloud. Good use of internal rhymes and assonance. What people missed before muppets!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Helen
