Balloon Animals
Please don't pop...41 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This piece is rated six stars. I find no wrong, and love the flow, the imagination and the effort exposed. Very well done. Perhaps a "won" is forthcoming if others feel likewise.
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This piece is rated six stars. I find no wrong, and love the flow, the imagination and the effort exposed. Very well done. Perhaps a "won" is forthcoming if others feel likewise.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I Love This!!!!!
It is creative,
Imaginative,
whimsical,
light,
and bouncy.
To truly experience and appreciate this verse, I read it aloud.
It is positively ALIVE.
You did a tremendous job word painting and drawing the reader in to take hold of the red balloon dog:)
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I Love This!!!!!
It is creative,
Imaginative,
whimsical,
light,
and bouncy.
To truly experience and appreciate this verse, I read it aloud.
It is positively ALIVE.
You did a tremendous job word painting and drawing the reader in to take hold of the red balloon dog:)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
Comment from Raul1
I never thought that there would people who have a fear of balloon animals but in other case it is true. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
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I never thought that there would people who have a fear of balloon animals but in other case it is true. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
Comment from jake cosmos aller
great poem about phobias. Never knew that one could have a phobia about balloons. there is a list of phobias that I have used from time to time listing them all. here it is
https://www.verywellmind.com/list-of-phobias-2795453 no fear of ballons but there is a related fear of clowns Coulrophobia:
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great poem about phobias. Never knew that one could have a phobia about balloons. there is a list of phobias that I have used from time to time listing them all. here it is
https://www.verywellmind.com/list-of-phobias-2795453 no fear of ballons but there is a related fear of clowns Coulrophobia:
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
Comment from Janet Foor
Smiling---this is a delightful poem of phobias. Popping balloons always makes me jump even when I'm expecting it. But. popping animal balloons is just wrong. well done.
Blessings
Janet
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Smiling---this is a delightful poem of phobias. Popping balloons always makes me jump even when I'm expecting it. But. popping animal balloons is just wrong. well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with effective imagery.
-You set the poem up well with what makes you tense.
-Good comparison with "fragile as glass."
-I like the closing lines as the child gets
the "newborn balloon dog!"
-A good entry; good luck.
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with effective imagery.
-You set the poem up well with what makes you tense.
-Good comparison with "fragile as glass."
-I like the closing lines as the child gets
the "newborn balloon dog!"
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
Comment from GWHARGIS
I always felt bad when someone made a balloon animal. All it took was one twist and the animal was maimed. I like how you formatted this. It made you pause when needed and see the twisting and molding going on. Well done.
Gretchen
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I always felt bad when someone made a balloon animal. All it took was one twist and the animal was maimed. I like how you formatted this. It made you pause when needed and see the twisting and molding going on. Well done.
Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
Comment from Gloria ....
This is a terrific entry into the phobia contest. I have never encountered this phobia before, but your strong writing alludes to the possibility of a bursting balloon animal setting off this phobia in a young child.
All the different fonts demonstrate anxieties that might arise.
Wishing you great luck with the voters. :))
Gloria
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This is a terrific entry into the phobia contest. I have never encountered this phobia before, but your strong writing alludes to the possibility of a bursting balloon animal setting off this phobia in a young child.
All the different fonts demonstrate anxieties that might arise.
Wishing you great luck with the voters. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
So are you afraid of the people who create balloon objects or the sound of a balloon being twisted into a form, or both. Well done free verse using word format to enhance the sights and sounds of this image/
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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So are you afraid of the people who create balloon objects or the sound of a balloon being twisted into a form, or both. Well done free verse using word format to enhance the sights and sounds of this image/
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
Comment from karenina
Interesting use of the varied fonts to imitate the action in your poem! I'm wondering, do you have a phobia about loud popping noises? Your tagline would suggest this! (Mine would be all balloons, including balloon animals!) By now you may have developed a new phobia for dimwitted reviewers such as me who get caught up in such questions when they ought to just enjoy the ride!
(I have to admit, it's not a phobia, but I HATE the "stridulous" whine of a balloon protesting!)
Karenina
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Interesting use of the varied fonts to imitate the action in your poem! I'm wondering, do you have a phobia about loud popping noises? Your tagline would suggest this! (Mine would be all balloons, including balloon animals!) By now you may have developed a new phobia for dimwitted reviewers such as me who get caught up in such questions when they ought to just enjoy the ride!
(I have to admit, it's not a phobia, but I HATE the "stridulous" whine of a balloon protesting!)
Karenina
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
