Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 23 "Cy and I"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
12 total reviews
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
True. But if I saw him, I'd run the other way.
Good job with your575, Bill. Your words were
descriptive.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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True. But if I saw him, I'd run the other way.
Good job with your575, Bill. Your words were
descriptive.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Jan
Comment from Ulla
Haha, your imagination knows no bounds, Bill, does it? Your 5-7-5 poem made me laugh out loud. How refreshing is that? I loved it. No more six to give. Sigh!!! Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Haha, your imagination knows no bounds, Bill, does it? Your 5-7-5 poem made me laugh out loud. How refreshing is that? I loved it. No more six to give. Sigh!!! Ulla:)))
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Ulla, for giving this a look.
Comment from kahpot
They say the eyes/eye is the window to the soul though I'm not sure if I would want any mirrors/windows in my vicinity if I was this guy, an excellent read and thanks for the smiles****kahpot
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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They say the eyes/eye is the window to the soul though I'm not sure if I would want any mirrors/windows in my vicinity if I was this guy, an excellent read and thanks for the smiles****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thanks, kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
What a great picture. And the weirdest thing is he is looking right at me, which of course means that is the single eye of a computer monitor.
I enjoyed this one very much. :))
Gloria
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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What a great picture. And the weirdest thing is he is looking right at me, which of course means that is the single eye of a computer monitor.
I enjoyed this one very much. :))
Gloria
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Gloria
Comment from Spitfire
That must be Cyclops. What makes this a gem is the take on a well known reference as eyes being windows to his soul. Also line two--literally seeing eye to eye.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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That must be Cyclops. What makes this a gem is the take on a well known reference as eyes being windows to his soul. Also line two--literally seeing eye to eye.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Shari, for giving this a look.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
When it comes to giving six stars, I wait towards the end of the week so I have them to give. But I have to give you a six for how funny, clever, and just brilliant Cy and I is.
Thank you for the smile.
Mary
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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When it comes to giving six stars, I wait towards the end of the week so I have them to give. But I have to give you a six for how funny, clever, and just brilliant Cy and I is.
Thank you for the smile.
Mary
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thanks so much, Mary, for the great review.
Comment from nomi338
Hey that's my old buddy Cy from the clops family. One thing that always impressed me was his singular vision. He was never distracted. He could have been a heck of a ball player as he always kept his eye on the ball.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Hey that's my old buddy Cy from the clops family. One thing that always impressed me was his singular vision. He was never distracted. He could have been a heck of a ball player as he always kept his eye on the ball.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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I know he has 20 vision.
Comment from judiverse
On some distant planet, this guy might be considered quite handsome. Who would want to look at him eye to eye here on earth? He is lacking if there's only one window to his soul. He is Ulysses' Cyclops. judi
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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On some distant planet, this guy might be considered quite handsome. Who would want to look at him eye to eye here on earth? He is lacking if there's only one window to his soul. He is Ulysses' Cyclops. judi
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Judi, for giving this a look.
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from BethShelby
What a picture. With an expression like that on his face, I'd be very nervous about seeing what might be going on in his soul, but if he's a friend of your, he can't be all bad. He isn't your muse by any chance, is he?
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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What a picture. With an expression like that on his face, I'd be very nervous about seeing what might be going on in his soul, but if he's a friend of your, he can't be all bad. He isn't your muse by any chance, is he?
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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He is not.
Comment from lyenochka
Okay, this isn't one for the younger kids. If he has only "one" window to his soul, I don't know if I could see "eye to eye" with him unless I was also a one-eyed ogre or cyclops. Lol.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Okay, this isn't one for the younger kids. If he has only "one" window to his soul, I don't know if I could see "eye to eye" with him unless I was also a one-eyed ogre or cyclops. Lol.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Don't be short sighted.
