Choose your fate carefully
A poem about wisdom40 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
This is an excellent poem that clearly states what path one needs to take and the our fate hangs in the balance. This one of the best poems I heard on the subject with message and rhyme.
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This is an excellent poem that clearly states what path one needs to take and the our fate hangs in the balance. This one of the best poems I heard on the subject with message and rhyme.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022
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Thanks Beth, for these exceptional comments and a lovely review, blessings Roy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Keeping the preaching coming, preacher. The world needs a Town Crier. Additionally, who is called upon all day in any other name. That would be a canard, I think.
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Keeping the preaching coming, preacher. The world needs a Town Crier. Additionally, who is called upon all day in any other name. That would be a canard, I think.
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
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Thanks Tom for these excellent comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Roy, giving you less than a six for this would itself be a sin. This is beautifully rhymed and well written. It is something everyone should read.
It carries a very strong message, well done, my friend. Willie
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Roy, giving you less than a six for this would itself be a sin. This is beautifully rhymed and well written. It is something everyone should read.
It carries a very strong message, well done, my friend. Willie
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
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Thanks Willie, for these fantastic comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from kahpot
Love the eternal rhyme and end rhymes, the message within is wonderful
"it's judged by how we've loved that counts, reveals how grace was won."
A read about faith and believing that He is the Father's Son, very well written and an inspirational read****kahpot
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Love the eternal rhyme and end rhymes, the message within is wonderful
"it's judged by how we've loved that counts, reveals how grace was won."
A read about faith and believing that He is the Father's Son, very well written and an inspirational read****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
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Thanks Kim for these splendid comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from jake cosmos aller
another masterful exploration of Christian faith and what that means as you go on the journey of life makes me think about the great Pilgrim's progress and other epic Christian faith poems
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another masterful exploration of Christian faith and what that means as you go on the journey of life makes me think about the great Pilgrim's progress and other epic Christian faith poems
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
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Thanks Jake, for these great comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from harmony13
The author's words reinforce how having faith will help us through the
times of strife in our life. As the author's states, God's grace is what
counts! The poem flows and connects well. Thank you for the author's
notes and Bible quotes - they comfort the soul. The artwork is awesome!
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The author's words reinforce how having faith will help us through the
times of strife in our life. As the author's states, God's grace is what
counts! The poem flows and connects well. Thank you for the author's
notes and Bible quotes - they comfort the soul. The artwork is awesome!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
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Thanks Maria, for these great comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from nomi338
Never have I been more grateful to have a six star to award. The weighty message and the awesome and profound word choices are beautiful and very well and wisely chosen and presented. This is beautiful work, some of your best ever. Obviously, I am very much impressed.
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Never have I been more grateful to have a six star to award. The weighty message and the awesome and profound word choices are beautiful and very well and wisely chosen and presented. This is beautiful work, some of your best ever. Obviously, I am very much impressed.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
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Thanks Bro for these super comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is a powerful poem about having your trust in Him to forgive. If one does harm by sinning, not only is one in need of God's forgiveness, but one must also undo the harm done to others.
Beautifully written.
Blessings,
Mary
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This is a powerful poem about having your trust in Him to forgive. If one does harm by sinning, not only is one in need of God's forgiveness, but one must also undo the harm done to others.
Beautifully written.
Blessings,
Mary
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
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Thanks Mary, for these great comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
Comment from GWHARGIS
I once told a friend that I was a Christian and she laughed at me. I have an admittedly terrible potty mouth. I told her that God understands me. He may wish I'd communicate better but he forgives me. I have faith that he loves me. He loves me even with my flaws. I don't think I could have moved past some parts of my life without my faith. Beautiful poem.
Gretchen
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I once told a friend that I was a Christian and she laughed at me. I have an admittedly terrible potty mouth. I told her that God understands me. He may wish I'd communicate better but he forgives me. I have faith that he loves me. He loves me even with my flaws. I don't think I could have moved past some parts of my life without my faith. Beautiful poem.
Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
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You?re absolutely right Gretchen He loves you beyond measure, thanks for the super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janet Foor
Thank you Roy for your words of wisdom. Our faith that guides us everyday is found in Jesus alone.
Excellent rhyme and internal rhyme throughout this thoughtful and powerful message.
Blessings
Janet
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Thank you Roy for your words of wisdom. Our faith that guides us everyday is found in Jesus alone.
Excellent rhyme and internal rhyme throughout this thoughtful and powerful message.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
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Thanks Janet, for these great comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy
