Comment from Debi Pick Marquette

Excellent

Lovely as always Roy. And what I love about it the most is that it's truthful as always. I also love that I need not be perfect, because that's not possible. But He is and to Love and accept Him as our Savior is such a gift and gives so much joy to those who repent. Thank you for another inspirational poem!

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022

Thanks Debi, for your great support and an excellent review, blessings Roy

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I enjoy this poem. It leads people to think of their regrets. Everyone might once make a mistake. As long as one admits the mistake, corrects it and pray to God for forgiveness, one will not be let down by God.

Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022

Thanks, for your great support and an excellent review, blessings Roy

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Great philosophy. Great doctrine. Well said. Well written.
It might be a bit choppy in places, and the rhyming a bit forced: served/merged, bag/hag (hag might be the forced one, while perfection 'should' be our goal.
God bless and best wishes.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022

Thanks Wayne, for your wonderful comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Roy,
I love that you always put a positive spin on all you write and within such a delightful melodic verse Roy. Yes, there is a lot of faith involved... but I see that as a positive when the intent is pure and has something valuable to lend. Which I find your words do.

I love the presentation, the rhyme, the flow and composition. The image accompanying this poem is very effective, as are your notes.

I love your heart and soul Roy, it reflects and shines through your art my friend. Always a pleasure to read your work.

With our thoughts we create...
a righteous choice.

Kind regards,
James.

 Comment Written 31-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022

Thanks James for your wonderful comments and a terrific review, blessings Roy

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

This definitely needs more than one reading. Interesting line about it's only grace from God that counts. For me, this sounds like the doctrine of Calvinism if I remember correctly.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022

Nah, nothing like Calvinism, Calvin was about predestination, grace for one but not someone else, that?s nothing like grace, that?s favouritism, choice is for anyone who wants it. God loves everyone, no respecter of persons, the choice is all ours. But thanks for the great review, blessings Roy

reply by Spitfire on 31-Aug-2022

Thanks for clarifying.

reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022

Welcome

Comment from aryr

Excellent

The picture was rather delightful, Roy. Your words were perfect. They showed that faith and trust and love brings forth the word of God and His Son-Jesus Christ. Only through faith can you call Him. Blessings.

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022

Thanks Alie, for these lovely comments and review, blessings Roy

reply by aryr on 31-Aug-2022

Most welcome, Roy. Blessings.

Comment from Liz Westfall

Excellent

This is a lovely poem. I really appreciate how you noted that the goal isn't perfection. Faith and love are the most important things. Nobody is perfect. We all make mistakes. We may have doubts. But what matters is the good we DO cause and create.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022

Thanks Liz, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Teri7

Exceptional

Roy, This is a very well written poem you have penned about using wisdom and repenting when you sin and don't keep doing it. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose and your words, Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022

Thanks Teri, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

God loves us so much. To choose Him, we choose the way of love, even through we must submit to being reschooled. Christ's love is the example. Sending you my best today as always for this marvelous offering. Virtual six! Sal XOs

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022

Thanks Sally, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Interesting artwork and good presentation, Roy.
-Notes are appreciated.
-A well written poem with effective imagery and rhyme.
-You have good examples of our time on this earth and having wisdom and faith to do the best job we can.
-I like the line about not self diagnosing
"what self has said and done."
-A good concluding verse referring back to wisdom.
-Well done.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2022

Thanks Pam, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by Pam (respa) on 31-Aug-2022

You are very welcome, Roy.