One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from kahpot
Meditating, Monk, Reflecting, what a wonderful combination and image as your excellent haiku gives the reader an excellent image, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Meditating, Monk, Reflecting, what a wonderful combination and image as your excellent haiku gives the reader an excellent image, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from aryr
Definitely a wonderful picture, Gypsy. Your words were indeed special to me because they showed that that the meditative monk was reflective. Blessed be n hugs!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Definitely a wonderful picture, Gypsy. Your words were indeed special to me because they showed that that the meditative monk was reflective. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Aryr,
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Blessed be and hugs.
Gypsy
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Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed be n hugs!
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, Once again, your play on words is fantastic. I especially liked:
sits by a lake full of moon --
reflecting
(Good imagery)
Well chosen artwork. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Hi Gypsy, Once again, your play on words is fantastic. I especially liked:
sits by a lake full of moon --
reflecting
(Good imagery)
Well chosen artwork. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Margaret,
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written haiku with a good topic.
-Good alliteration and description of the monk.
-A very good image in line two with
"lake full of moon."
-A good satori line that links both together well.
-Well done!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Gypsy.
-A well written haiku with a good topic.
-Good alliteration and description of the monk.
-A very good image in line two with
"lake full of moon."
-A good satori line that links both together well.
-Well done!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Pam,
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
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You are very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
I like the description of "lake full of moon." And it is a full moon that is reflected in the lake. And the meditating monk is also "reflecting." Great choice of words!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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I like the description of "lake full of moon." And it is a full moon that is reflected in the lake. And the meditating monk is also "reflecting." Great choice of words!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Yes, you got it. I love zen haiku. I like that kind of satori. It doesn't always happen.
Besitos y abrazos
Marival
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and I like the descptive liberty taken with both the lines, 'lake full of moon," and 'Reflecting." Very creative and colorful turn of phrases!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and I like the descptive liberty taken with both the lines, 'lake full of moon," and 'Reflecting." Very creative and colorful turn of phrases!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this Haiku with us. I enjoyed reading and I could envision the monk meditation under a full moon. I'm sure the moon assisted him with his thoughts.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you for sharing this Haiku with us. I enjoyed reading and I could envision the monk meditation under a full moon. I'm sure the moon assisted him with his thoughts.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from zanya
What a beautiful image 'a lake full of moon'- filled with Nature's light and mystique -the words chosen create a meditative atmosphere - the power of words well chosen
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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What a beautiful image 'a lake full of moon'- filled with Nature's light and mystique -the words chosen create a meditative atmosphere - the power of words well chosen
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Zanya,
Thank you very much for your time, exceptional six stars review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Yes, I understand the idea of reflecting by a Moonlite lake. I often go on nature walks and reflect on the singing of the birds and the smell of the trees. I get a lot of inspiration from my nature walks. This is an excellent Haiku and you know better than anyone how to do them.
Thanks for sharing and for letting me share.
Jesse
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Yes, I understand the idea of reflecting by a Moonlite lake. I often go on nature walks and reflect on the singing of the birds and the smell of the trees. I get a lot of inspiration from my nature walks. This is an excellent Haiku and you know better than anyone how to do them.
Thanks for sharing and for letting me share.
Jesse
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Jesse
Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Extra Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome, Gypsy.
Keep enjoying those Moonlite walks for me.
Jesse
Comment from Ricky1024
"Meditative Monk"
Written in Haiku follows the
5-7-5 guidelines correctly.
The picture accents the font.
Well written rich in theme and imagery..
No Grammar Issues and flows well
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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"Meditative Monk"
Written in Haiku follows the
5-7-5 guidelines correctly.
The picture accents the font.
Well written rich in theme and imagery..
No Grammar Issues and flows well
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
