Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This one-hundred-word story, Nymph, has the required word count and tells a would-be rape tale that ends well. I wonder what will now happen to the "cowboy" now?

The grammar has a few bugs in it that do not affect the story, but are distracting.

(Run Forest, or better said run to the forest!)
This first sentence could be eliminated and not affect the story. If it is required for word count, it is better replaced within the story.

Ramona had the most (fabulous) date, but (it) ended badly. He jumped her in the most (horrific) way. She was old school, no touchee on the first date. But he was "new wave", I pay for dinner, I need my "reward"!

Thanks (to) the Angel, that he stopped the car(;) that was her chance to escape. The forest seemed the only option.

She ditched her heels and jacket(;) her black pants and blouse offered the perfect camouflage for this endevour. She stopped and the fir tree engulfed her.

(Puzzled) he shrieked: "Fucking witch!"

(Smiling) she answered(,) "I am a freaking nymph, cowboy!"

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2022

Comment from jessizero

Good

This was a cute story! I really enjoyed reading it.
Just a few things:
You need a comma after "better said"
"Ended up badly" needs to say "it ended badly"
The whole old school/new wave part is phrased badly
You need a comma after "puzzled" and it needs to lose the extra "e"
You need a comma after "smiling" and it needs to lose the extra "l"

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2022