Solo
Who cares4 total reviews
Comment from estory
I like the way the rhythm of the poem and the regular beat of the rhyme scheme mimics the rhythm of birds flapping their wings, so it really echoed one of the central images of the poem. estory
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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I like the way the rhythm of the poem and the regular beat of the rhyme scheme mimics the rhythm of birds flapping their wings, so it really echoed one of the central images of the poem. estory
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Thank you so much for the heart-warming review:) a usual it's top notch
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem was well thought out, Iza. I enjoyed reading it,
though it's poignant for reasons unknown to me. I liked the
good use of rhyme and the repeated first two lines at the end,
I have missed you on FS. Glad you're back.
Take care, Jan
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Your poem was well thought out, Iza. I enjoyed reading it,
though it's poignant for reasons unknown to me. I liked the
good use of rhyme and the repeated first two lines at the end,
I have missed you on FS. Glad you're back.
Take care, Jan
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Hi Jan, thank you so much for your insightful review, you made my night:)
Comment from lyenochka
Even though that "useless fight didn't bring any joy," God is still with you and will use even those things that seemed useless to bring some treasures in your life. We all need to trust God even if we don't fly solo.
Trusting the God (remove 'the')
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Even though that "useless fight didn't bring any joy," God is still with you and will use even those things that seemed useless to bring some treasures in your life. We all need to trust God even if we don't fly solo.
Trusting the God (remove 'the')
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
Comment from Theodore McDowell
A poem about trusting God and yourself to take flight in this world. I read your bio and saw that you are originally from Romania. I love Romania. My family lived there for two months a long time ago in an orphanage. Best wishes.
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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A poem about trusting God and yourself to take flight in this world. I read your bio and saw that you are originally from Romania. I love Romania. My family lived there for two months a long time ago in an orphanage. Best wishes.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Hi Theodore, you know your name in Greek means a gift from Gods:)
