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Comment from Liz Westfall
This was wonderful. I really liked the perspective of the upside-down sand you chose. It invokes mystery and thought. I also really liked your word choice and imagery.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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This was wonderful. I really liked the perspective of the upside-down sand you chose. It invokes mystery and thought. I also really liked your word choice and imagery.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Glad you enjoyed this Liz as much as I did while writing it.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Love the arabesque dance of your patern of the patterns in the sand. It has a magical echoing that reverberates through time and space. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Love the arabesque dance of your patern of the patterns in the sand. It has a magical echoing that reverberates through time and space. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Thanks Iza and so glad to see you enjoying this one.
Doctor Ricky1024