Poem in the Wind
A blowing wind stole my writing effort.7 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Laughing here...
I know! It's not funny! It just reminds me of "The dog ate my homework!"
The muse is elusive enougj...she needs no help from the wind!
Karenina
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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Laughing here...
I know! It's not funny! It just reminds me of "The dog ate my homework!"
The muse is elusive enougj...she needs no help from the wind!
Karenina
Comment Written 30-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022
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I will drink to that one. Thanks for your read and feedback.
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Now I think you are grasping for excuses. This is a nice poetic way to phrase that you can't think of anything to write. But I see it really did happen. Not good. Get inside. What's a poet doing outside anyway? ;))
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Now I think you are grasping for excuses. This is a nice poetic way to phrase that you can't think of anything to write. But I see it really did happen. Not good. Get inside. What's a poet doing outside anyway? ;))
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Enjoying the mother nature and the thoughts she may bring. Try it outside, you might like it. Thanks for the read and the feedback. Anyway, I thought it beat the dog eat it.
Comment from Bill Schott
This under-ten-word poem, Poem in the Wind, uses nine of the required word count and notes that, paradoxically, the poem read is the poem swept away.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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This under-ten-word poem, Poem in the Wind, uses nine of the required word count and notes that, paradoxically, the poem read is the poem swept away.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Thanks for the read and feedback.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Thanks for the note, too.
-You have used your few words well with a good topic.
-Effective nature imagery, and the concluding line is good,
showing the result of the breeze that 'swept in'.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-Thanks for the note, too.
-You have used your few words well with a good topic.
-Effective nature imagery, and the concluding line is good,
showing the result of the breeze that 'swept in'.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your read and encouraging comments.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Regina Elliott
No pun intended but this is
a wonderfully breezy poem
under 10 words. A great
contender for the contest.
My very best wishes for this
contest. Have a very creative
week. ~
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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No pun intended but this is
a wonderfully breezy poem
under 10 words. A great
contender for the contest.
My very best wishes for this
contest. Have a very creative
week. ~
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your read and encouraging comments.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Very cute and funny. Excellent use of ten words and you paint great visuals with your words.
That's why I usually write my poetry inside (lol).
Excellent rendition of the contest theme, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Very cute and funny. Excellent use of ten words and you paint great visuals with your words.
That's why I usually write my poetry inside (lol).
Excellent rendition of the contest theme, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Yes, it is safer, but I still like to write outside especially in the morning. Thanks for the read and the comments.
Comment from 1Dreamer
Laughing out loud at the inference to the dog ate my homework. Very cleverly done and the picture you chose is perfect. All the best in the competition.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Laughing out loud at the inference to the dog ate my homework. Very cleverly done and the picture you chose is perfect. All the best in the competition.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the read and the encouraging feedback.
