Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao !

You have three votes now.

Jesus is on call 24/7 , up to us to create a loving friendship with Him.

If we seek help He will give it to us.

We should also remember to thank Him for all the beautiful things He Has created to delight us like the fauna and flora , the sunsets, the mountains , the oceans.

Stay safe!

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022

Thanks!

reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022

Please review my Sue's new job poem..

reply by tempeste on 30-Aug-2022

Ciao !

Unfortunately I voted for the News Gives me the Blues.. this morning.

For now , we both have no votes in this contest. ( at least I?m in good company.. smiles)

Promise , I ll check the next entry you have in booth .

Ciao !

reply by the author on 30-Aug-2022

ok

reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022

Tempeste, you don't have to wait till my poems are in the voting booth before you read and review them

reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022

Are you doing ok?

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

I know a song that sings these words and trust in the value offered, and still, go to bed without genuflecting to my knees to show respect. Life is a .... better left unsaid.

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022

ThankS!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This was well done. I enjoyed how your poem shared that getting on your knees to the Lord can help you get through the day. Your poem was easy to read. Rhymed nicely and flowed perfectly. Wonderful.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022

Thanks!

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

What a great poem. Prayer is key not to lose the way, it's our guiding light and our salvation. You brought it very well here.

Nice rhyming, good imagery visuals, presentation and spiritual content.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022

Thanks!