Forest Paradise
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Comment from lyenochka
You mixed a fairytale wonderland with the gospel message with allusions to Jacob's dream in Genesis 28 when he dreamed of the ladder to Heaven. which we know symbolizes Jesus.
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Fair dryads play their mystical sharade, (charade?)
In this nirnana paradise was found, (nirvana)
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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You mixed a fairytale wonderland with the gospel message with allusions to Jacob's dream in Genesis 28 when he dreamed of the ladder to Heaven. which we know symbolizes Jesus.
Comments:
Fair dryads play their mystical sharade, (charade?)
In this nirnana paradise was found, (nirvana)
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the great review and comments, Helen. The edits have been implemented.
Comment from amahra
Beautiful artwork--so soothing in powder blue and green. I loved the poem; it was written well with great rhyming and rhythm.
cacophony, nirnana [love being introduced to words I've never used]
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Beautiful artwork--so soothing in powder blue and green. I loved the poem; it was written well with great rhyming and rhythm.
cacophony, nirnana [love being introduced to words I've never used]
Comment Written 26-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much for the great review and the six. I really appreciate it.
