Forest Paradise
a sonnet12 total reviews
Comment from harmony13
The forest especially for me is intense at night. I pondered on these words and thought about the dream the author shared. I understood in the author's words why their was weeping. The artwork is perfect and gave me a vision of the forest at night. The last stanza left me in awe!
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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The forest especially for me is intense at night. I pondered on these words and thought about the dream the author shared. I understood in the author's words why their was weeping. The artwork is perfect and gave me a vision of the forest at night. The last stanza left me in awe!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2022
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Thank you so much for the great review
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
. . . and what a beautiful dream you shared, ET.
Your sonnet is beautifully presented. I enjoyed
reading it. Each word was carefully chosen and
added to the dream-like atmosphere. The imagery
of the woods was super. I could see and hear all
of the sounds. It's amazing how that dream affected
you the way it did. The picture is serene.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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. . . and what a beautiful dream you shared, ET.
Your sonnet is beautifully presented. I enjoyed
reading it. Each word was carefully chosen and
added to the dream-like atmosphere. The imagery
of the woods was super. I could see and hear all
of the sounds. It's amazing how that dream affected
you the way it did. The picture is serene.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the superb review and the comments, Jan. They are greatly appreciated.
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Comment from Janet Foor
Paradise Found is a beautifully written sonnet with excellent rhyme and meter. The artwork fits the scene you paint perfectly.
Some experiences do change us and we truly are never the same. Maybe a little glimpse of heaven.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Paradise Found is a beautifully written sonnet with excellent rhyme and meter. The artwork fits the scene you paint perfectly.
Some experiences do change us and we truly are never the same. Maybe a little glimpse of heaven.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thank you for exceptional review and the six. I am honored.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, EM.
-A well written sonnet with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the mystical nature of verse one.
-Verse two continues the theme by
painting a good word picture of sound
and the waterfall.
-A good turn as you were lulled to sleep and
"dreamt of Jesus coming off his cross."
-A very good closing couplet.
-Thanks for sharing it.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, EM.
-A well written sonnet with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like the mystical nature of verse one.
-Verse two continues the theme by
painting a good word picture of sound
and the waterfall.
-A good turn as you were lulled to sleep and
"dreamt of Jesus coming off his cross."
-A very good closing couplet.
-Thanks for sharing it.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the great review and comments Pam. I am glad you enjoyed my sonnet.
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You are very welcome!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A magical night full of haunting music and scary spirits, sounds of waterfalls in this paradise of saintly grandeur that brought us to tears, much enjoyed, a fine shell rhymed and metered sonnet, a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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A magical night full of haunting music and scary spirits, sounds of waterfalls in this paradise of saintly grandeur that brought us to tears, much enjoyed, a fine shell rhymed and metered sonnet, a pleasure to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thanks for a great review and comments, Dolly. I am glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from leather
This poem made me think of heaven and not earth. My earthly experiences would have me sleeping in the brambles, bitten by red ants, and swatting mosquitoes while being drenched in a downpour. So, this was a refreshing read and a break from reality.
Well done.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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This poem made me think of heaven and not earth. My earthly experiences would have me sleeping in the brambles, bitten by red ants, and swatting mosquitoes while being drenched in a downpour. So, this was a refreshing read and a break from reality.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the great review.
Comment from royowen
Well done, a beautiful written and well presented post, it is truly beautifully done. The scene you've described and articulated can be seen most indelibly in the soul, you obviously love the myths surrounding the mysteries that dwell in this beauty. Smooth, nicely written, everything comes together, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Well done, a beautiful written and well presented post, it is truly beautifully done. The scene you've described and articulated can be seen most indelibly in the soul, you obviously love the myths surrounding the mysteries that dwell in this beauty. Smooth, nicely written, everything comes together, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thank you for the great review and comments, Roy. I am glad you enjoyed it.
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Most welcome
Comment from Theodore McDowell
nice poem about spiritual rebirth. I love this line: a waterfall's cascade of silver drums. You express your faith experience in a unique way through the forest imagery. Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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nice poem about spiritual rebirth. I love this line: a waterfall's cascade of silver drums. You express your faith experience in a unique way through the forest imagery. Well done.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us. I enjoyed the sporadic alliteration, the rhythm, and rhyming scheme. The entire package was good. I really enjoyed the fairies and the gospel mingling together.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us. I enjoyed the sporadic alliteration, the rhythm, and rhyming scheme. The entire package was good. I really enjoyed the fairies and the gospel mingling together.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thank you.
Comment from karenina
I never have sixes on Friday! This is so deserving!
Sprinkle of alliteration with cacophony/cascade/cross ...
Again with serenade/spirits/sound/saintly/silver/same...
Magical and reverent imagery take this a notch above!
(literally!)
Karenina
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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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I never have sixes on Friday! This is so deserving!
Sprinkle of alliteration with cacophony/cascade/cross ...
Again with serenade/spirits/sound/saintly/silver/same...
Magical and reverent imagery take this a notch above!
(literally!)
Karenina
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022
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Thanks for the great review and a virtual six, Karen. I am glad you enjoyed this.
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You KNOW I love your sonnets! Always!
