Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a beautifully worded 5-7-5 contest entry. The syllable count is on point. The text is large and easy to read. The visual fits perfectly. It has been my favorite thus far. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022

Thank you for the reading and the response.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 5-7-5 poem, though I count eight syllables in line two.
If you agree, 2,2,1,3, you can edit or maybe drop the word "wind".
Otherwise, you've got marvelous descriptive imagery.
Best wishes in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022

Thanks for the catch. I have edited to "blustery wind orchestrates".

reply by rspoet on 27-Aug-2022

You left out the s on orchestrates.

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2022

Thanks again.