Malfunction, hopefully
I believe this isn't meant to happen.30 total reviews
Comment from amahra
I love your artwork and the word "Glows" that compliments it. I also looked up your sdrawkcab word and found it spelled backwards. How clever that was.
Best wishes in the contest.
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I love your artwork and the word "Glows" that compliments it. I also looked up your sdrawkcab word and found it spelled backwards. How clever that was.
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Clever visual with the letter play. At first I started to write a misspelling for backwards, then I looked closer. Every sentence the last word speaks for itself. Very Kewl.
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Clever visual with the letter play. At first I started to write a misspelling for backwards, then I looked closer. Every sentence the last word speaks for itself. Very Kewl.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
Comment from John Ciarmello
This is a super clever piece. I must admit it took me a few tries with the backward (sdrawkcab) writing before I got it. This was a fun piece. Loved it! Best, JohnC
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This is a super clever piece. I must admit it took me a few tries with the backward (sdrawkcab) writing before I got it. This was a fun piece. Loved it! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
Comment from karenina
Very revelc!
Love the s-t-r-e-t-c-h-i-ng, too!
This is sure to stand out among the 5-7-5 entries...
In the best possible way!
Addendum: This was "blind" when I read it. I should have known it was you! I hope lots of folks are finding your work, Thomas!)
My money's on you, anonymous!
Karenina
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Very revelc!
Love the s-t-r-e-t-c-h-i-ng, too!
This is sure to stand out among the 5-7-5 entries...
In the best possible way!
Addendum: This was "blind" when I read it. I should have known it was you! I hope lots of folks are finding your work, Thomas!)
My money's on you, anonymous!
Karenina
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
Comment from Aussie
Interesting play with words. Was your character drunk and trying to get a taxi? Have never reviewed backwards writing, only those who have no idea how to write a poem. Be kind said I and help that guy. Good luck with your entry. K XX
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Interesting play with words. Was your character drunk and trying to get a taxi? Have never reviewed backwards writing, only those who have no idea how to write a poem. Be kind said I and help that guy. Good luck with your entry. K XX
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
If only time was counting backwards I would love to reward my life a little and you made me smile here with your 5-7-5, I fit so much into everyday that I think I do stretch time! Ha ha ha, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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If only time was counting backwards I would love to reward my life a little and you made me smile here with your 5-7-5, I fit so much into everyday that I think I do stretch time! Ha ha ha, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
Comment from Janet Foor
Interesting and original 5/7/5 poem. Not sure of the meaning of the poem but your syllable count seems to be perfect. Great picture to add to the poem. Unique use of a word spelled backwards.
Blessings
Janet
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Interesting and original 5/7/5 poem. Not sure of the meaning of the poem but your syllable count seems to be perfect. Great picture to add to the poem. Unique use of a word spelled backwards.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
Comment from estory
Interesting, imaginative use of form here, that last line with stretching all stretched out on the page reminded me of EE Cummings work. It speaks of a mysterious moment of time, lingering somehow, in that neon glow, in the space stretching around us, but the experience itself is unarticulated and lies underneath somewhere. estory
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Interesting, imaginative use of form here, that last line with stretching all stretched out on the page reminded me of EE Cummings work. It speaks of a mysterious moment of time, lingering somehow, in that neon glow, in the space stretching around us, but the experience itself is unarticulated and lies underneath somewhere. estory
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is clever and a realistic view of what could happen in the future. At first, I was thrown off by what seemed to be nonsense but when I read in your author's notes that it was backward spelled backward then I knew what it was about and loved the innuendo of it all!
Futuristic and well thought out this is an excellent poem!
Jesse
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This is clever and a realistic view of what could happen in the future. At first, I was thrown off by what seemed to be nonsense but when I read in your author's notes that it was backward spelled backward then I knew what it was about and loved the innuendo of it all!
Futuristic and well thought out this is an excellent poem!
Jesse
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
Comment from Tom Horonzy
At first, until I read the author's notes, I asked myself what?!!! Thanks for the definition. It made it clear. Good luck. I'm going to leave for a drink... of water, to clear my head, :-)
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At first, until I read the author's notes, I asked myself what?!!! Thanks for the definition. It made it clear. Good luck. I'm going to leave for a drink... of water, to clear my head, :-)
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022