The Little Brown Bag
Shall we take a look inside my mind.17 total reviews
Comment from estory
nice little comedic piece about misinterpretation, and I think you set it up very well with those early clues and strange smells. The twist at the end came out of nowhere and we have to laugh at the situation. estory
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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nice little comedic piece about misinterpretation, and I think you set it up very well with those early clues and strange smells. The twist at the end came out of nowhere and we have to laugh at the situation. estory
Comment Written 05-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2022
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Hello, my friend. I'm so glad this story brought a chuckle and a smile. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from leather
This is written so much above the average submission that it is exceptional, and I'm giving it a six-star rating. This is an easy read with a good mix of commentary and dialogue. No grammar or spelling problems.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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This is written so much above the average submission that it is exceptional, and I'm giving it a six-star rating. This is an easy read with a good mix of commentary and dialogue. No grammar or spelling problems.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Hello, my friend. I'm so glad this story brought a chuckle and a smile. Thank you for your kind words and shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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You're welcome.
May you also have a great day and holiday.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
I had one more review before signing off for now. I am glad I picked this delightful, brilliant, and beautifully written one. All the theories imagined gave me a smile. Knowing her man's thinking of conspiracy theories, she shuts him down and goes off to get supper.
Her is my last six. I am glad I had one left.
Best wishes and regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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I had one more review before signing off for now. I am glad I picked this delightful, brilliant, and beautifully written one. All the theories imagined gave me a smile. Knowing her man's thinking of conspiracy theories, she shuts him down and goes off to get supper.
Her is my last six. I am glad I had one left.
Best wishes and regards,
Mary
Comment Written 03-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Hi, Mary. I'm so glad this story brought a chuckle and a smile. Thank you for your kind words and shiny six stars. They are deeply appreciated!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Spitfire
This is delightful and beautifully written. I wish I had a sixer left. I loved all the theories concocted by the narrator, especially the one about the Egyptians. His wife is on to the imagination of her husband. I love the way she handles the situation.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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This is delightful and beautifully written. I wish I had a sixer left. I loved all the theories concocted by the narrator, especially the one about the Egyptians. His wife is on to the imagination of her husband. I love the way she handles the situation.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Hello, my friend. I'm so glad this story brought a chuckle and a smile. Thank you for your kind words and thoughts of a six!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from evilynne
That is quite funny and well written. It was a pleasure to read. The picture is a nice compliment to the story. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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That is quite funny and well written. It was a pleasure to read. The picture is a nice compliment to the story. Best of luck in the contest! Evi
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2022
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Hi, Evi. I'm so glad this story brought a chuckle and a smile. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from GWHARGIS
I think Bob needs to hold his cards more closely to his person. That was quite an imagination. He was all over the place with his ideas for her evil plans. Fun read.
Gretchen
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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I think Bob needs to hold his cards more closely to his person. That was quite an imagination. He was all over the place with his ideas for her evil plans. Fun read.
Gretchen
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Hi, Gretchen. I'm so pleased this story brought a chuckle and a smile. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Wendy G
You have a great imagination for the contents of the bag - but the wife knows you inside out! What a great story, written very well and with humour! well done. I enjoyed it a lot.
Wendy
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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You have a great imagination for the contents of the bag - but the wife knows you inside out! What a great story, written very well and with humour! well done. I enjoyed it a lot.
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Hi, Wendy. I'm so glad this story brought a chuckle and a smile. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was so funny, Mike, you lost out big-time this time! LOL. With an imagination like yours, you'll never be stuck for a story, I loved this one. The ending was perfect! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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That was so funny, Mike, you lost out big-time this time! LOL. With an imagination like yours, you'll never be stuck for a story, I loved this one. The ending was perfect! Well done, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 02-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Hi, Sandra. I'm so glad this story brought a chuckle and a smile. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Malcolm Rothery
Great story, Mike. We've all been there. I always find my eyes drawn to people's bags on the bus or the train. I have a bottomless curiosity, except these days it is likely to get me a black eye.
My weirdest experience - no wait - that could make a story! Watch this space!
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Great story, Mike. We've all been there. I always find my eyes drawn to people's bags on the bus or the train. I have a bottomless curiosity, except these days it is likely to get me a black eye.
My weirdest experience - no wait - that could make a story! Watch this space!
Comment Written 01-Sep-2022
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2022
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Hi, Malcolm. To inspire another writer is one of the greatest compliments any writer could get. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Your conspiracy theories are as convincing as mine, except that your wife seems to understand you, and not get freaked out. Mine had less simple endings for me, until I learned to limit my interactions with others. Enjoyed this piece of writing very much. Kate xx
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Your conspiracy theories are as convincing as mine, except that your wife seems to understand you, and not get freaked out. Mine had less simple endings for me, until I learned to limit my interactions with others. Enjoyed this piece of writing very much. Kate xx
Comment Written 31-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 02-Sep-2022
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Hi, Kate. I'm so glad this story brought a chuckle and a smile. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
