The Power of Pain
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Comment from leather
Pain is a beastly companion-- never welcome and seldom willing to leave quickly. This poem seems to end in a deadly conclusion--pain leads to death. This is well-written, stays on topic, and is free of spelling errors.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Pain is a beastly companion-- never welcome and seldom willing to leave quickly. This poem seems to end in a deadly conclusion--pain leads to death. This is well-written, stays on topic, and is free of spelling errors.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much Leather. Appreciated a great deal.
Wendy
Comment from GARY MACLEAN
Couldn't get any more explicit than that on what pain is. The question the doctor always asks when I go in for an appointment is "What is your pain level today?" The next time that happens I will say "Roaring out of control."
Nicely done.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Couldn't get any more explicit than that on what pain is. The question the doctor always asks when I go in for an appointment is "What is your pain level today?" The next time that happens I will say "Roaring out of control."
Nicely done.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Thank you Gary Great review, but I m sorry to hear of your constant and out of control pain.
Wendy
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Power of Pain, shows this world as a house of pain in which we survive by moving through it and finishing the struggle undeterred.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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This poem, The Power of Pain, shows this world as a house of pain in which we survive by moving through it and finishing the struggle undeterred.
Comment Written 28-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Thank you! Such a thoughtful review, Bill. I appreciate it.
Wendy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Through excellent use of personification and metaphors, your vividly descriptive poem conveys a powerful message about pain and what it can do to our very beings.
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Through excellent use of personification and metaphors, your vividly descriptive poem conveys a powerful message about pain and what it can do to our very beings.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review Janice. Appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Pain can seer through the body physically and mentally and coping with it is sometimes hard on our senses. Good health is so important and your poem is powerful and vivid with an ultimately deathly end, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Pain can seer through the body physically and mentally and coping with it is sometimes hard on our senses. Good health is so important and your poem is powerful and vivid with an ultimately deathly end, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review.
Comment from emmaysavage
You certainly capture without sentiment the many manifestations of pain and the experience of on one's life. I like your keeping it in the present tense
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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You certainly capture without sentiment the many manifestations of pain and the experience of on one's life. I like your keeping it in the present tense
Comment Written 26-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your positive review! I appreciate your kind words a lot.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, powerful, interesting, descriptive and creative. I pondered on the way pain hurts! The author's description was
intense, strong and painful. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome! Have a great weekend!...Maria
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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The author's words are engaging, powerful, interesting, descriptive and creative. I pondered on the way pain hurts! The author's description was
intense, strong and painful. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is awesome! Have a great weekend!...Maria
Comment Written 26-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much Maria! I appreciate your very kind review. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is A nicely written poem. Very powerful message In These words. Dust to dust ashes to ashes. Amazing photo to compliment your words. We'll done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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This is A nicely written poem. Very powerful message In These words. Dust to dust ashes to ashes. Amazing photo to compliment your words. We'll done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much Joanne. I appreciate your encouraging review and good wishes.
Comment from Michael Cassar
I enjoyed reading this poem. It conveys the fury of pain, but I failed to find you. You champion everyday over this volcanic crater. You have written beautiful lines about the human struggle for survival. God's blessings.
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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I enjoyed reading this poem. It conveys the fury of pain, but I failed to find you. You champion everyday over this volcanic crater. You have written beautiful lines about the human struggle for survival. God's blessings.
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Thank you for reviewing. Appreciated. But you were not meant to find 'me', as it is for universal application, however each individual experiences pain. I wrote it like that on purpose ....
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Thanks for your response. Mine was just a personal reaction. I felt there was much more behind the writer
Comment from royowen
A highly descriptively purposeful poem, centralising the pain of pain, the pain of heartbreak, discouragement and loss of faith, very disheartening, this is a great write, dictating the horror of a depressed and hapless but nor hopeless path, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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A highly descriptively purposeful poem, centralising the pain of pain, the pain of heartbreak, discouragement and loss of faith, very disheartening, this is a great write, dictating the horror of a depressed and hapless but nor hopeless path, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022
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Thank you very much for your thoughtful review.
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Most welcome
