Comment from Adri7enne

Exceptional

LOL! Fun! I love the way you give your demons such human characteristics while keeping them from human limitations. You never know what a demon is going to do next. Loving it!

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 28-Aug-2022

Thanks. I guess I'll have to write another chapter then

reply by Adri7enne on 28-Aug-2022

You get right at it and don't you stop until you have a good long story. Don't make me come to Portugal! Lol!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I like how Julius reacts to the questions about a name. Just shows the personality of this demon so well. This was very enjoyable. The dialogue between them was great. The story interesting. Well done.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2022

You're very kind, thank you

Comment from leather

Excellent

I can't give six-star ratings right now, so you get a five.

I enjoyed reading this nice mix of dialogue and commentary.

There is only one line that gave me pause, and that is: "The huge creature dropped the trunk into the stream. One end appeared open." My question: The end of what appears open--the trunk or the stream?

Other than that, I felt like I was reading a quality piece of work. Great work.
Best wishes.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2022

Thank you. I'll take a moral 6