the pack
a haiku19 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
How sweet this post is as these little guys have a lot of fun to look forward to as they please man with their antics, a wonderful Haiku Bill, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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How sweet this post is as these little guys have a lot of fun to look forward to as they please man with their antics, a wonderful Haiku Bill, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Dolly
Comment from kahpot
Gorgeous artwork, yes, pups all have potential which will grow if the owner is understanding and knowledgeable, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Gorgeous artwork, yes, pups all have potential which will grow if the owner is understanding and knowledgeable, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thank you, kahpot
Comment from Teri7
Bill, This is an adorable haiku you have penned for the contest. How precious are those little dogs. You used great descriptive words and great imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Bill, This is an adorable haiku you have penned for the contest. How precious are those little dogs. You used great descriptive words and great imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Teri
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written haiku. It has a great overall presentation background and font. The puppy picture is adorable so sweet. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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This is a nicely written haiku. It has a great overall presentation background and font. The puppy picture is adorable so sweet. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Joanne
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Your welcome
Comment from BethShelby
They are so cute. I wish I had one of them. I like the alliteration in your haiku. I think all pups have potential. Some of us doesn't have the potential for bringing out the potential in them.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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They are so cute. I wish I had one of them. I like the alliteration in your haiku. I think all pups have potential. Some of us doesn't have the potential for bringing out the potential in them.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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New puppy, new potential, Beth.
Comment from lyenochka
So cute! And the alliterative group adjective of "handful" makes us think of little hounds. This would be a fun poster to put at a Humane Society office door. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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So cute! And the alliterative group adjective of "handful" makes us think of little hounds. This would be a fun poster to put at a Humane Society office door. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Helen
Comment from judiverse
Those pups are so sweet! I want one. Excellent work with alliteration. Handfuls of hounds and pups with potential are very apt. Those pups do have potential. They will grow up to be great companions and bring joy to whoever gets them. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Those pups are so sweet! I want one. Excellent work with alliteration. Handfuls of hounds and pups with potential are very apt. Those pups do have potential. They will grow up to be great companions and bring joy to whoever gets them. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Judi
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
The picture is so adorable, Bill. I enjoyed reading your contest
entry. Good job on the haiku style, though I would write 'wait'
instead of waiting. I know your work, your choice. It's ok to have
fewer than 17 syllables. You can add that note in author's notes.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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The picture is so adorable, Bill. I enjoyed reading your contest
entry. Good job on the haiku style, though I would write 'wait'
instead of waiting. I know your work, your choice. It's ok to have
fewer than 17 syllables. You can add that note in author's notes.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Jan
Comment from Regina Elliott
A heartwarming and charming haiku, Bill. Puppies
and kittens are God's gift to
us that tug on our heartstrings. My very best
wishes for the contest, this
is a good contender. All
the best ~
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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A heartwarming and charming haiku, Bill. Puppies
and kittens are God's gift to
us that tug on our heartstrings. My very best
wishes for the contest, this
is a good contender. All
the best ~
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Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2022
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Thanks, Regina
