From the Heart of a Lover
Love has infinite definitions.32 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I know not who you are, but I see a genius, evil as they may be, at work. How did you decide to use this form, I've never seen before. It had me confused, inquiring, what are they doing, and then I found the key was to read North to South, and it became abundantly clear. Very well done.
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I know not who you are, but I see a genius, evil as they may be, at work. How did you decide to use this form, I've never seen before. It had me confused, inquiring, what are they doing, and then I found the key was to read North to South, and it became abundantly clear. Very well done.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
Comment from Sanku
You have given a lot of definition to love.I like,'love is crossing the nile...'very much and also about the mother finch .But the best is the last line .Love is simply a life style.
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You have given a lot of definition to love.I like,'love is crossing the nile...'very much and also about the mother finch .But the best is the last line .Love is simply a life style.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It is difficult to read this poem with the words scattered about like this and your approach is unusual and leaves the reader a choice of words. You captured the essence of love here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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It is difficult to read this poem with the words scattered about like this and your approach is unusual and leaves the reader a choice of words. You captured the essence of love here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
Comment from Monica Chaddick
I think that your message is a really good one, and the artwork that you selected is beautiful. However, with the way it is set up I had a very difficult time reading it. I saw your note that it was not to be read in any particular order, and that it didn't read from left to right. Still, I wasn't sure how to read it. Best of luck in this and all endeavors.
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I think that your message is a really good one, and the artwork that you selected is beautiful. However, with the way it is set up I had a very difficult time reading it. I saw your note that it was not to be read in any particular order, and that it didn't read from left to right. Still, I wasn't sure how to read it. Best of luck in this and all endeavors.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
Comment from karenina
It's about the freesest free verse I've ever encountered!
After a bit, I had fun fitting lines together to form a linear thought from a nonlinear presentation!
"love is the mother finch who constructs the nest"
--That appealed!
Avant garde!
Uniquely you, anonymous!
As "the eyes of crocodiles will scan your movement"
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I'll be looking to see how this fares in the contest!!!
Thanks for coloring outside the lines!
Karenina
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It's about the freesest free verse I've ever encountered!
After a bit, I had fun fitting lines together to form a linear thought from a nonlinear presentation!
"love is the mother finch who constructs the nest"
--That appealed!
Avant garde!
Uniquely you, anonymous!
As "the eyes of crocodiles will scan your movement"
--
I'll be looking to see how this fares in the contest!!!
Thanks for coloring outside the lines!
Karenina
Comment Written 23-Aug-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading this verse about love.
The sentiment is clear and heartfelt.
It is funny how we can forget what love
is and can be.
But then a poet expresses it perfectly.
I will admit the format makes it a little
confusing to read, as I had to reread a
few times to grasp the meaning.
I do appreciate the uniqueness of the
presentation.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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I enjoyed reading this verse about love.
The sentiment is clear and heartfelt.
It is funny how we can forget what love
is and can be.
But then a poet expresses it perfectly.
I will admit the format makes it a little
confusing to read, as I had to reread a
few times to grasp the meaning.
I do appreciate the uniqueness of the
presentation.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Thank you for your review!
Comment from harmony13
I feel this author said everything and more that love is! I really liked the
last 3 lines. I once read love is a risk and we choice to love. I felt the last 3 lines comes close to my previous sentence! The poem flows and connects well. The way this poem is written is extremely creative. The artwork goes well with these words!
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I feel this author said everything and more that love is! I really liked the
last 3 lines. I once read love is a risk and we choice to love. I felt the last 3 lines comes close to my previous sentence! The poem flows and connects well. The way this poem is written is extremely creative. The artwork goes well with these words!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice free verse free rant poem about what is love? I liked this poetic take very much. I will be entering my entry soon but am afraid the competition will be tough. LOL
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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nice free verse free rant poem about what is love? I liked this poetic take very much. I will be entering my entry soon but am afraid the competition will be tough. LOL
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Jake! Good luck to you in the competition!
Comment from BermyBye50
Brilliant!!! What a spectacular write. An interesting approach composing a free verse with the idea of a poem within a poem in answer to the What is Love? contest prompt. There is a wealth of wisdom in the many individual stanzas climaxing in a a first class closing statement defining the simplicity of Love.
Cheers,
Eugene
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Brilliant!!! What a spectacular write. An interesting approach composing a free verse with the idea of a poem within a poem in answer to the What is Love? contest prompt. There is a wealth of wisdom in the many individual stanzas climaxing in a a first class closing statement defining the simplicity of Love.
Cheers,
Eugene
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Thank you, Eugene!
Comment from LovnPeace
I love this, not only for it's message, but because of the creativity and unique style. No lines to follow, Encompasses nearly Every involvement, Good luck, Blessings, Barbara, xo
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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I love this, not only for it's message, but because of the creativity and unique style. No lines to follow, Encompasses nearly Every involvement, Good luck, Blessings, Barbara, xo
Comment Written 22-Aug-2022
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2022
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Thank you Barbara!
